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Tuesday, April 20, 2010

NaiSaiKu



NaiSaiKu

What is NaiSaiKu?
NaiSaiKu is basically a Haiku, or Haiku-length verse,
which is then repeated backwards.
The title is sandwiched between the two separate verses,
or is formed by the third line of the first verse.
The title is CAPITALISED.
The rules are very flexible, and the main thing is to have fun.
Examples of NaiSaiKu construction are found below:

Start with a Haiku:

Alone in the world
Unloved and unlovable
He’s his own best friend

Then simply repeat the lines in reverse order:

Alone in the world
Unloved and unlovable
HE’S HIS OWN BEST FRIEND
Unloved and unlovable
Alone in the world


Or,
Alone in the world
Unloved and unlovable
He’s his own best friend
ALONE IN THE WORLD
He’s his own best friend
Unloved and unlovable
Alone in the world


Or,
Alone in the world
Unloved and unlovable
He’s his own best friend
UNLOVED AND UNLOVABLE
He’s his own best friend
Unloved and unlovable
Alone in the world


Or even,
Alone in the world
Unloved and unlovable
He’s his own best friend
ONLY THE LONELY
He’s his own best friend
Unloved and unlovable
Alone in the world


For further details and your chance
to try the NaiSaiKu challenge?
Click HERE

AMERICAN ALLITERATION – AOK

After an awkward altercation, Al admitted anxiety.
On occasion, obstinate objections obviously overwhelm.
Keen kissing Karen keyed karma, killed kidology, kindling kindness.



‘FOUND’ AMERICAN SENTENCES


“You’re a social chameleon, what on earth we gonna do with you?”
From the song CORPSES IN THEIR MOUTHS by IAN BROWN
From the Album UNFINISHED MONKEY BUSINESS

“Last night the plans for a future war, was all I saw, on Channel Four.”
From the song SHOPLIFTERS OF THE WORLD by THE SMITHS
From the Album LOUDER THAN BOMBS

“Dying all the time; lose your dreams and you lose your mind, in life unkind.”
From the song RUBY TUESDAY by THE ROLLING STONES
From the Album BETWEEN THE BUTTONS

“The pack on my back is aching; the straps seem to cut me like a knife.”
From the song FOOLS GOLD by THE STONE ROSES

“He’ll never make that hill in a million years; whip-crack beating down.”
From the song WHAT THE WORLD IS WAITING FOR by THE STONE ROSES

“She’s a black magic woman; she’s gonna make a devil out of me.”
From the song BLACK MAGIC WOMAN by SANTANA
From the Album ABRAXAS

“Stained glass windows keep the cold outside, while the hypocrites hide inside.”
From RELIGION by PUBLIC IMAGE LIMITED
From the Album PUBLIC IMAGE LIMITED, or PIL, or FIRST ISSUE

“If you have five seconds to spare, I’ll tell you the story of my life.”
From the song HALF A PERSON by THE SMITHS
From the Album LOUDER THAN BOMBS

“He doesn’t know who Jesus was, what praying is; how can he be saved?”
From the song CHRISTMAS by THE WHO
From the Album TOMMY

“And she feeds you tea and oranges that come all the way from China.”
From the song SUZANNE by LEONARD COHEN
From the Album SONGS OF LEONARD COHEN

“Michelle, ma belle, sont les mots qui vont très bien ensemble; très bien ensemble.”
From the song MICHELLE by THE BEATLES
From the Album RUBBER SOUL

“All the poets studied rules of verse, and those ladies, they rolled their eyes.”
From the song SWEET JANE by THE VELVET UNDERGROUND
From the Album ROCK ‘N ROLL ANIMAL

15 comments:

  1. Phew, I see you've been at the music box again, Stan! Many thanks for the NaiSaiKu examples and the American Sandwich alliteration.

    I like that shoplifters one best in the 'found' section. Hold on a mo, I've just spotted 'Sweet Jane'. Maybe you should start a lost section as well. (only joking)

    aka Andy Sewina

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  2. Thanks Andy;
    What goes round...
    Just hoping that some might see and take up the Challenge.
    Just thought... American Graffiti...?
    Lost in music - there's a thought...

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  3. Hi Stan,
    I have done a NaiSaiku Challengehere
    Do tell me what you think?
    hugs
    shakira

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  4. Thanks Shakira; I'll take a look.

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  5. Would love to take part in the challenge but the sun is shining and I have chores to do - keep me in mind though!

    Thanks so much for contributing, always appreciated.
    Denise (ABC Team)

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  6. It's kind of hard for me to do it ^)^. And a bit confused too, I guess it takes a while for me to understand how it goes. Happy Wednesday! Thanks for the visit!

    ABC Wednesday~Nikon

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  7. Thank you Stan for visiting me,
    I am here for ABC WEDNESDAY.
    Happy Wednesday!
    Mine is here
    hugs
    shakira

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  8. Thanks to:
    Mrs Nesbitt; It's never too late!
    Manang Kim; You never know till you try.
    Shakira; And you were there for NaiSaiKu - thank you.

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  9. I've seen NaiSaiKu before, but never knew what it was called. Interesting concept.


    ROG, ABC Wednesday team

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  10. Thanks Roger; Just a bit of fun.

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  11. I love reading Haiku. On behalf of the ABC Wed. team thanks for playing.

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  12. Hmm. I'm sorry, but I don't like this art form any better than I like Haikus. I guess I'm not cultured enough. ;)

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  13. Thanks to:
    lv2scpbk; Join in the fun.
    Jay; I always thought culture grew in a petri dish... :)

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  14. Love the found American Sentences. A whole new take on things. I'm not so serious about the naisaiku as some are, but I do love the looseness of style and the potential of jarring a thought loose. :) Nice work.

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  15. Thanks Tumblewords. I keep finding more...and NaiSaiKu isn't really meant to be serious, but you can make it as heavy or as light as you like.

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