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Sunday, April 20, 2014

NaPoWriMo 2014 - Day 20


Wordle words from Sunday Whirl: Bones, Twice, Stolen, Water, Sink, Rocking, Open Mess, Aches, Bridge, Sway, Limb, Sharp.

STAND AND DELIVER


Sharp exits in stolen cars
Troubled water sink or swim
Wide open to twice the risk
Out on a limb you’re rocking!

Rebel life is in your bones
The law holds no sway with you
Body aches to burn that bridge
Try not to leave any mess!
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20 comments:

  1. Andy SewinaApril 20, 2014 at 2:16 PM

    Love the abrupt ending.

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  2. Jae RoseApril 20, 2014 at 4:33 PM

    At a certain age that rebel life comes with a can of polish and a duster..tempting to cross back over though..to rock again!

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  3. Old EggApril 20, 2014 at 5:42 PM

    Once a rebel always a rebel. Curiously mankind needs them!

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  4. Magical Mystical TeacherApril 20, 2014 at 7:26 PM

    It's the trying not to leave a mess that's SO difficult!

    Nine Fishing Tales

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  5. brenda wApril 21, 2014 at 12:17 AM

    That rebel life forms pieces of my youth. It's surprising that we live through those days. Well penned, Stan!

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  6. AnonymousApril 21, 2014 at 2:55 AM

    There is a lot of power in this poem... Strong words, put together brilliantly!

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  7. J Cosmo NewberyApril 21, 2014 at 6:34 AM

    Phew! Rapid fire wordle!

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  8. vivinfranceApril 21, 2014 at 1:52 PM

    Leaving mess, ie the consequences of our actions, is an inevitable result. This poem flows well

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  9. Belva Rae StaplesApril 22, 2014 at 6:57 AM

    The longer we live, the bigger the mess. Nice work!

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  10. kaykualaApril 22, 2014 at 9:00 AM

    Do it the right way to avoid the mess! Wisely Stan!

    Hank

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