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Monday, April 15, 2013

NAPOWRIMO 2013 #15

HALF LIFE



Semi-autobiographical?
Mathematical half-true story?

Barring a few of the gory details
it never fails to grab our attention

And did I mention it's based on fact?
Though half is missing, to be exact

And no-one's guessing the reason why
It makes me cry, it's so frustrating!

And I'm not even exaggerating
I'm just debating the pros and cons
while the frozen ones start on their fast thaw

Relaxing their jaw to have their say
they offer a ray of clarity...

But everyone knows reality
can often be stranger than fiction

... as in this depiction of life

Instrumental contributions from Changnoi: Go on click them!
http://says-sir-ten.blogspot.co.uk/2013/04/electric-changnoi_1729.html
http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=IYLAiYrzI2A

14 comments:

  1. This has great rhythm, Stan. Thoroughly enjoyable.

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  2. Yeah, love the rhymes, and happy half way!

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  3. Yeah, love the rhymes, and happy half way!

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  4. Indeed rhyme and reason. Good one, Stan.

    Pamela

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  5. At least instrumentals don't talk back.
    I like your piece. It quite reminds me of the front page of the supermarket tabloids. And sadly even the regular daily paper sometimes.

    Thanks for your visit.

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  6. Half life poem for half way through NaPo! Bravo! I'm with Jules, this did remind me of the front page of the supermarket tabloids.

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  7. I know I already replied to this, but on the wrong page. We are half way through and I'm still hoping I make it. You seem to have a full head of steam. Congrats,

    Elizabeth

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