BANG BANG
Unkind as it seems
my dreams
involve a revolver
and you
bringing me into
your view
aiming and setting
your sights
right on the whites of
my eyes
calmly ignoring
my cries
pulling the trigger
on me
Go figure out how
I'm free...
Instrumental contributions from Changnoi: Go on click them!
http://says-sir-ten.blogspot.co.uk/2013/04/electric-changnoi_1729.html
http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=IYLAiYrzI2A
Phew, the neighbours will be really talking now!
ReplyDeleteThanks Andy :)
DeleteHoly Buckets, Batman! That was a run...
ReplyDeleteThanks Brenda :)
DeleteI just listened to Changnoi! Tell him that he is beautiful (in a totally manly way). He moves me.
ReplyDeleteJust remember where you saw him first ;)
DeleteWow, Stan, that was powerful. I don't want to dream like that and I don't want you to either,
ReplyDeletePamela
Thanks Pamela :)
DeleteCrumbs. (gulp)
ReplyDeleteHopefully, that was play!
ReplyDeleteThanks Misky :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Jinksy :)
ReplyDeleteWonderful poem!
ReplyDeleteWhatever did you eat before you went to sleep? ;)
Here's me, off-prompt:
http://herwordsbloomed.blogspot.com/2013/04/2013-napowrimo-5-in-this-kitchen_5.html
Thanks Marianne :)
DeleteThe brief lines, staccato sounds make this all the more astounding. And the music video is great.
ReplyDeleteElizabeth
http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2013/04/05/a-gambol-with-time/
Dreams...traps? Or limitless sky?
ReplyDeleteNice guitar work too.
Thanks for your visits.
The speed that your rhyme brings is befitting of the topic!! Great job. :)
ReplyDeleteScary poem...awesome music!
ReplyDeleteThanks Heidi :)
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