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Friday, April 5, 2013

NAPOWRIMO 2013 #5

BANG BANG



Unkind as it seems
my dreams
involve a revolver
and you
bringing me into
your view
aiming and setting
your sights
right on the whites of
my eyes
calmly ignoring
my cries
pulling the trigger
on me

Go figure out how
I'm free...


Instrumental contributions from Changnoi: Go on click them!

http://says-sir-ten.blogspot.co.uk/2013/04/electric-changnoi_1729.html

http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=IYLAiYrzI2A

19 comments:

  1. Phew, the neighbours will be really talking now!

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  2. Holy Buckets, Batman! That was a run...

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  3. I just listened to Changnoi! Tell him that he is beautiful (in a totally manly way). He moves me.

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  4. Wow, Stan, that was powerful. I don't want to dream like that and I don't want you to either,

    Pamela

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  5. Wonderful poem!
    Whatever did you eat before you went to sleep? ;)

    Here's me, off-prompt:
    http://herwordsbloomed.blogspot.com/2013/04/2013-napowrimo-5-in-this-kitchen_5.html

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  6. The brief lines, staccato sounds make this all the more astounding. And the music video is great.

    Elizabeth
    http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2013/04/05/a-gambol-with-time/

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  7. Dreams...traps? Or limitless sky?
    Nice guitar work too.
    Thanks for your visits.

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  8. The speed that your rhyme brings is befitting of the topic!! Great job. :)

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