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Tuesday, April 16, 2013

NAPOWRIMO 2013 # 16

DEEP



Don't say my plan is to mislead you.
The day you can, then yes indeed, you
must report my action; be abrupt.
Distort, augment, but never corrupt.

Whatever occurs is for the best.
Don't rest until your duty is done.
The beauty is, you'll find it becomes
some kind of mental merry-go-round...

All very profound... Don't you agree...?


Instrumental contributions from Changnoi: Go on click them!
http://says-sir-ten.blogspot.co.uk/2013/04/electric-changnoi_1729.html
http://www.youtube.com/watch?feature=player_embedded&v=IYLAiYrzI2A
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13 comments:

  1. MarianneApril 16, 2013 at 7:33 PM

    That mental merry-go-round is a curse.

    With all the insanity in the world, it's reassuring to know your poem will be here first thing in my morning. Thanks, Stan.

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  2. vivinfranceApril 16, 2013 at 8:58 PM

    I do, I do, I do (agree, I mean)

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  3. MiskyApril 16, 2013 at 11:03 PM

    Oh yeah, oh yeah, oh yeah. Stan the man.

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  4. JulesApril 17, 2013 at 1:41 AM

    If we could only solve all our problems with rhymes instead of crimes...

    Thanks for your visit.

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  5. AnonymousApril 17, 2013 at 2:08 AM

    I'd say yes too, but was never much good as part of a chorus. Like the enjambment you used in the first verse, and that last line makes me grin,

    Elizabeth

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  6. flaubertApril 17, 2013 at 3:33 AM

    Well, those mental merry go rounds can be difficult, Stan. Good one.

    Pamela

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  7. Andy SewinaApril 18, 2013 at 3:09 AM

    Phew, I agree!

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  8. Stan SkiApril 18, 2013 at 3:25 AM

    Thanks Andy :)

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