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NaPoWriMo Day 5
NaPoWriMo Day 5
Today, let’s make poetry really personal.
Give poetry, as you write it, a name.
Possibly a gender.
And a personality.
A poet I know has written (and continues to write) a series of poems based on this principle,
and I shamelessly ripped it off (with permission, of course) and made a poem I called “Sasha.”
Sasha is many things, all at the same time, yet all are Sasha/poetry to me.
So it’s your turn.
Give poetry — how you view poetry, what poetry means to you, your poetry — a name.
Now write a poem suits your view or vision.
A certain je ne sais quoi to a lot of my writing, so I call it plain ‘X'
Give poetry, as you write it, a name.
Possibly a gender.
And a personality.
A poet I know has written (and continues to write) a series of poems based on this principle,
and I shamelessly ripped it off (with permission, of course) and made a poem I called “Sasha.”
Sasha is many things, all at the same time, yet all are Sasha/poetry to me.
So it’s your turn.
Give poetry — how you view poetry, what poetry means to you, your poetry — a name.
Now write a poem suits your view or vision.
A certain je ne sais quoi to a lot of my writing, so I call it plain ‘X'
Your tamarind-tart humour
puts some off you; draws some in.
Your egg-shell outer coating,
sturdy-looking yet so thin,
conceals an inner softness;
closely guarded no-go zone,
displayed on rare occasion
puts some off you; draws some in.
Your egg-shell outer coating,
sturdy-looking yet so thin,
conceals an inner softness;
closely guarded no-go zone,
displayed on rare occasion
to reveal your heart of stone.
That's a touch don't touch circumstance - but isn't so much of life that's worth anything...
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Image & Verse
Thanks Rob; If my words can trigger a reaction and provoke thought, then I consider it mission accomplished. Whether or not opinions expressed are my own, is beside the point - they are always subject to interpretation anyway.
ReplyDeleteReally enjoyed the egg-shell metaphor. Grat work.
ReplyDeleteI liked this poem a lot.It paints a familiar landscape.
ReplyDeletegreat take on the prompt!
ReplyDeleteand now, for some reason, I'm hungry.
This poem provides a feeling of texture, and at the same time leaves the reader at a distance with the cold heart of stone. Nice touches.
ReplyDeleteStan,
ReplyDeleteVery nice take on the prompt!
Pamela
THIS is another good read Mr Ski..thanks
ReplyDeleteYeah, I like the trinity thing you've got going here...
ReplyDeletebtw, if the basket in the Tamarind tree picture is six on the clockface, is that a man with a machine gun at eleven?
Thanks to:
ReplyDeleteDan; Appearances...
Rallentanda; Experience...
Angie; Suggestion...
Leonard; Layers...
Pamela; Perceptions...
Wayne; Personalities...
Thanks Andy; Got me again - He must be bananas if he thinks no one can see him.
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