Write a poem today that illustrates your idea of what is inside-out.
MINISTRY OF INTELLIGENCE
or;
INSIDE OUT,
BACK TO FRONT,
THE WRONG WAY ROUND
Given an attention span
of miniscule proportions,
it’s little wonder really
nothing seems to sink in
Given his stormy background,
his ability to survive
the strain on his endurance;
one has to sympathise
Given an environment
conducive to lucent thought,
a positive attitude
will banish ignorance
Given his capacity
to absorb, retain, repeat,
remains intact; undamaged,
the boy has potential
Given intellectual
associates, surroundings;
academic achievement
is well within his grasp
Given scope for improvement;
a helping hand to guide him,
time under our tuition,
the best days of his life
Given an education;
a ‘vital’ curriculum,
University entrance,
a viable concept
Given the range of subjects
available to study,
the light shed in dark corners
means moments never dull
Given the motivation;
a mentor’s inspiration
fires the imagination;
provokes fascination
Given the understanding
our innate pride denies us,
minus bias; prejudice;
perspective balances
Given the time, the patience,
the level of attention
required; we hope we may gain
the knowledge that we seek
Given-: we take for granted
our penchant for displaying
patronising attitudes
of condescending clowns
Nice work, Stan! I love the final quatrain, especially "penchant for displaying
ReplyDeletepatronising attitudes..." I'll stop by again soon.
Thanks Dan; You're welcome to visit anytime. thanks for stopping by and commenting.
ReplyDeleteHi, Stan. Thanks for dropping by my site. I'll be sure to follow your blog during NaPoWriMo 2010. - Greg =)
ReplyDeleteThanks Greg; The more the merrier!
ReplyDeleteThese were great Stan! friggin' inspired...
ReplyDelete...rob
Thanks Rob; There is an attitude that just doesn't rub...
ReplyDeleteInteresting answer to the challenge.
ReplyDeletegood one, but that's a given.
ReplyDeleteliking all that repetition
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ReplyDeletePoemblaze; Priorities...
Briarcat; Taken...
Swiss; Say that again...
nice Stan...enjoyed the read...Ski ??? there is still some spring SKI...ing up her in the Rocky Mtns.
ReplyDeleteThanks Wayne; I Ski only by name, but you enjoy the snow while it lasts.
ReplyDeleteLove the clowns at the end! Good one!
ReplyDeleteThanks Linda; They were there all along!
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