For Haiku Bones Devotion
And NaiSaiKu Challenge?
And The American Sandwich
HAIKU BONES DEVOTION
I was in a state
North of Philadelphia
West of Devotion
NaiSaiKu
I was in a state
North of Philadelphia
West of Devotion
THE IMMATURE CALL IT LOVE
Far from Devotion
Beyond Philadelphia
I’ve been in that state
AMERICAN INFATUATION
I was in a state, brought about by uncontrollable emotion.
Metaphorically speaking, it lies north of Philadelphia.
The immature call it Love, but it’s somewhere well west of Devotion.
NANO AMERICO^
I was in a state.
Metaphorically speaking, it lies north of Philadelphia.
The immature call it Love.
WALLS + WIRES
I was in a state, brought about by uncontrollable emotion.
North of Philadelphia.
The immature call it Love, but it’s somewhere well west of Devotion.
AMERICAN SENTENCE
There is a state of mind, beyond brotherly love, far from devotion.
Nicely Stan, sounds like Nirvana!
ReplyDeleteWow, I like all the forms of it!
ReplyDeleteThanks Andy; Feels like it too when you're there.
ReplyDeleteFourwindshaiga. I'm still looking for that place, Devotion.
America is west,
ReplyDeleteand mine is Asia
I've live and die with my own...
with love and devotion...
Thanks Inay; Who says 'The West is the best'...?
ReplyDeleteLots of fun here! Nice variations on the theme. I enjoyed these, especially being a native Philadephian!! (Actually, I'm really from just west (wish I could say 'north') of the city of brotherly love.
ReplyDeleteThanks Robin; You have a head start on most of us!
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