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Monday, March 29, 2010

ABOVE THE LAW

For Monday Poetry Train Revisited


SYLLABLE SESTINA

When will we understand
and end her villainy?
Three tanned gunmen thrilled her.
Her evil band then stun,
plunder twenty grand, kill
Jill Dunne and her G-Men.
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5 comments:

  1. Julia Phillips SmithMarch 29, 2010 at 8:43 AM

    Inspired by events, or a story poem? Either way, it's riveting.

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  2. Stan SkiMarch 29, 2010 at 9:28 AM

    Thanks Julia; It's pure fiction.

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  3. Andy SewinaMarch 29, 2010 at 10:06 PM

    Nicely Stan, this looks bang-on! I like the way you got from When to men!!!

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  4. gautami tripathyMarch 29, 2010 at 10:13 PM

    It is a short fiction!

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  5. Stan SkiMarch 30, 2010 at 4:31 AM

    Thanks to:
    Andy; It fell into place quite nicely.
    Gautami; A 'flash' in the pan!

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