Thanks to: Nessa; I think most would use the word 'Aura' more 'conventionally'. Aayushi; In medical terms 'Aura' is a condition experienced before a seizure - an icy chill, accompanied by blinding flashes of light.
Thanks to: Mojo; You could be right, but I'll leave it as it is. Loch Rob; 'Intice', or perhaps 'Entice' would be a good substitute for 'Herald'. Carina; Haiku is an appropriate way of expressing many things in few words.
Thanks to: Patti; I wanted an alternative use of aura, and found it. Robin; This kind odf aura is a very powerful sensation. Tammie; In medicine, the term aura usually applies to the sensations experienced prior to a seizure, or eoileotic fit.
I love the word zephyr.
ReplyDeleteI feel a bit on edge now.
1st Day of Spring!
I like the paradox between the idea of a zephyr and a convulsion...well written!
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ReplyDeleteNessa; I think most would use the word 'Aura' more 'conventionally'.
Aayushi; In medical terms 'Aura' is a condition experienced before a seizure - an icy chill, accompanied by blinding flashes of light.
Powerful words for a disturbing incident.
ReplyDeleteThanks Anthony; An Aura is not neccesarily a pleasent thing.
ReplyDeleteI like the negative shades of it..
ReplyDeleteas a dirge it sucks!
Tight,concise,vivid; great write!
ReplyDeleteIntense and striking, yet with so few words! Powerful.
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ReplyDeleteGautami; I like to explore perspectives.
Dances; An alternative side of Aura.
Sweetest; It's a fact of life for many.
I usually associate zephyrs with warm winds, so this gets outside the box for me. Which is good.
ReplyDeleteA powerful grouping of words that intice paradox. Simple yet complex. I like it Stan!
ReplyDeleteThough provokingly short. Haiku is perfect for that kind of idea, and you do it well.
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ReplyDeleteMojo; You could be right, but I'll leave it as it is.
Loch Rob; 'Intice', or perhaps 'Entice' would be a good substitute for 'Herald'.
Carina; Haiku is an appropriate way of expressing many things in few words.
Nicely done! Great choice of words~
ReplyDeleteHi Stan--I'm with Rob on this. It's a very powerful post--and I think each and every word that you used makes it so.
ReplyDeleteyou have me wondering about what sort of convulsion?
ReplyDeleteYour words painted images in my mind, they pulled me in.
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ReplyDeletePatti; I wanted an alternative use of aura, and found it.
Robin; This kind odf aura is a very powerful sensation.
Tammie; In medicine, the term aura usually applies to the sensations experienced prior to a seizure, or eoileotic fit.
Powerful - it's edgy and a little frightening.
ReplyDeleteSorry Tammie I must have taken my eyes off the keyboard there - I meant ePilePtic fit.
ReplyDeleteThanks Tumblewords; To witness AND to experience.
ReplyDeleteBrilliantly portrayed! I'm left chilled and on alert!
ReplyDeleteThanks Sister Julia; I'm not sure how I would prepare for such an event.
ReplyDeleteStan;
ReplyDeletebrilliant!i cant say much more!
Thanks Amity; One word does the job.
ReplyDeleteOh, like migraine aura, but worse. Powerful words for a powerful event.
ReplyDeleteThanks Fourwinds; I guess 'aura' is applied to many conditions.
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