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Saturday, June 8, 2013

WORDLE #112

For Sunday Whirl: Status, Page, Rest, Park, Curb, Shimmering, Steps, Spill, Yard, Spewing, Thunder, Jets.

WHAT'S ON YOUR MIND?



Just updating my status
on my mobile Facebook page.
Taking a rest from traffic
as I park close to the curb.

'Shimmering steps spill their guts
out onto the rain-soaked yard.
Sky above spewing thunder
and random jets of lightning...'

33 comments:

  1. That is what I call wonderful wordling. Thanks for your encouragement.

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  2. Now THAT'S what I call a poetic status update!

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  3. Very clever - perfectly satisfying - a wonderful poem - one of my favorites of yours :)

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  4. Clever & amusing, liked they way you used "Status!"

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  5. Ideas come and go! If they're not noted immediately they might just disappear. Stopping by to update is a good idea! Nicely Stan!

    Hank

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  6. Wonderfully visual piece, Stan. Love the second stanza.

    Pamela

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  7. I love it when the wordle words come together like this, don't you? Good job. Pictorily perfect.

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  8. Rich and concise! Startling status update, Stan.

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  9. Great use of the prompt words! Very visual!

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  10. You certainly have a gift for wordling.

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  11. Heh Heh,, and yeuk! a great word perfect wordle!

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  12. Yes Stan. As perfect as I've seen yet. Seamless and expressive. Brava!

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  13. Excellent! I loved how you mixed the mundane with such vivid attention to details

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