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Saturday, June 8, 2013

WORDLE #112

For Sunday Whirl: Status, Page, Rest, Park, Curb, Shimmering, Steps, Spill, Yard, Spewing, Thunder, Jets.

WHAT'S ON YOUR MIND?



Just updating my status
on my mobile Facebook page.
Taking a rest from traffic
as I park close to the curb.

'Shimmering steps spill their guts
out onto the rain-soaked yard.
Sky above spewing thunder
and random jets of lightning...'
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33 comments:

  1. vivinfranceJune 9, 2013 at 3:19 PM

    That is what I call wonderful wordling. Thanks for your encouragement.

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  2. J Cosmo NewberyJune 9, 2013 at 6:22 PM

    I think I'd park somewhere else!

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  3. MarianneJune 9, 2013 at 7:21 PM

    Hah! It's what we do. :)

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  4. Laurie KolpJune 9, 2013 at 7:23 PM

    Very effecive brevity.

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  5. nanJune 9, 2013 at 9:43 PM

    Now THAT'S what I call a poetic status update!

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  6. Dr. Pearl Ketover Prilik (PKP)June 9, 2013 at 9:48 PM

    Very clever - perfectly satisfying - a wonderful poem - one of my favorites of yours :)

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  7. annell4June 9, 2013 at 9:52 PM

    Fun to read!

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  8. UnknownJune 9, 2013 at 10:12 PM

    Clever & amusing, liked they way you used "Status!"

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  9. kaykualaJune 9, 2013 at 11:44 PM

    Ideas come and go! If they're not noted immediately they might just disappear. Stopping by to update is a good idea! Nicely Stan!

    Hank

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  10. flaubertJune 10, 2013 at 1:12 AM

    Wonderfully visual piece, Stan. Love the second stanza.

    Pamela

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  11. CherylJune 10, 2013 at 1:13 AM

    I love it when the wordle words come together like this, don't you? Good job. Pictorily perfect.

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  12. brenda wJune 10, 2013 at 1:46 AM

    Rich and concise! Startling status update, Stan.

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  13. WabiSabiJune 10, 2013 at 7:27 AM

    Great use of the prompt words! Very visual!

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  14. Old EggJune 10, 2013 at 10:45 AM

    You certainly have a gift for wordling.

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  15. veronicaJune 10, 2013 at 3:23 PM

    Heh Heh,, and yeuk! a great word perfect wordle!

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  16. Walt WojtanikJune 10, 2013 at 7:15 PM

    Yes Stan. As perfect as I've seen yet. Seamless and expressive. Brava!

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  17. MiskyJune 10, 2013 at 9:02 PM

    You are a wordsmith, Stan.

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  18. gautami tripathyJune 14, 2013 at 12:25 AM

    Wonderful update!!

    universe will not hand it over to you

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  19. AnonymousJune 14, 2013 at 10:45 PM

    Excellent! I loved how you mixed the mundane with such vivid attention to details

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