CHEERS...!
A guy walks into a bar
teeth chattering from the cold
Splits a fifty note to buy
a scoop or two of moonshine
Anything for a giggle
Says - I know this sounds crazy
and won't make a load of sense
so I'll just cut to the chase...
Cave paintings depict our dreams!
So I try not to wake up...
It shatters the illusion...
Viv ia giggling mightily at this.
ReplyDeleteThanks Viv :)
DeleteIsn't that what illusions re for?
ReplyDeleteThis flow really well.
Thanks JCN :)
DeleteI think a scoop of moonshine sounds pretty good right now.
ReplyDeleteThanks Helena :)
DeleteChuckles! Smooth flow to what could have been a boisterous pub scene. Nicely Stan!
ReplyDeleteHank
Thanks Hank :)
DeleteHehehe!! Loved it and I am still hallucinating over it!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Nanka :)
DeleteThis is great! I love your droll voice throughout! Made me giggle!Whirl 113
ReplyDeleteThanks WabiSabi :)
ReplyDeleteAh so many dreams, so little moonshine. Thanks for the laugh Stan,
ReplyDeleteElizabeth
Thanks Elizabeth :)
DeleteI like how you maintain the "lingo" throughout. Really enjoyed your writing.
ReplyDeleteThanks Maggie :)
DeleteAlway s ready for a scoop or two of moonshine! Fun write, St an!
ReplyDeleteThanks Marianne :)
DeleteYou don't need moonshine to be carried away. Just look at real cave paintings and realize how wonderful that is; having mankind reaching out telling you their story after thousands of years.
ReplyDeleteThanks Oldegg :)
ReplyDeleteGreat flow to this, Stan. Thanks for the laugh. A fun read.
ReplyDeletePamela
Thanks Pamela :)
DeleteMoonshine has that impact on people. Love your playful nature, Stan. It's always a treat stopping by Elephant Small.
ReplyDeleteThanks Brenda :)
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