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The simpleness of the writing - and I mean that in the good way - takes this to a higher level. For me, anyway.
Thanks Thom; Keep it basic and it can be understood.
the first verse makes you think. The last is sad.
Thanks Dee; I blame the middle verse.
The third line says it all for me, there is no Escape!
Thanks Andy; You can run, but you can't hide.
Each one was vivid and succinct with so few words...the last one had a great impact.
Powerful and vivid
Thanks to:Sweetest; Obnoxious v inconspicuous...?Tammy; Points to note.
The first two lines really gave me food for thought. But of course there's no escape. Not one most of us would choose, at any rate. Therein lies the great conundrum of life.
Awesome...noisy, colorful!LOvely poem! So powerful!
The middle verse I relate with easily. Of course I suppose I should not be reading haikus at work. :-) Good job all around Stan!
the longing never seizes..momentarily we gather our thoughts throughout the day...nothing like a good song... tho it is hard to hold still... love does just the same don't you think stanski...moves as we do...
wise words in simple form!
Thanks to:Ann; Have to make the best of a bad deal.Amity; All in the same boat whatever the personality.Jay; Every job has its perks.Pieceofpie; Just as fickle.Jingle; Haiku can do that.
So much depth in these short lines!
Thanks Tumblewords; But perhaps revealing how shallow life can be for some.