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Yes! well said! Love the word "thresholds"!
Thanks Linda; I thought it sounded better than 'limits'.
Isn't this the truth? "Mood thresholds"...I liked that description.
Thanks Fledgling Poet; I'll check out yours.
Yep, that's a great line. Excellent.
a perfect line.
the whole piece is well done, with a nice slap at the end.
Very interesting choice of words. Loved the poem. (=
I like the way you got LSD into the first line twice and and still managed to jumble it up into the end of thresholds too! Hypnotic influences? Pounds shillings and pence!exineve
Very nice, thought-evoking usage!
Provocative post! Neatly done~
Thanks to:Anthony North; cheers!Thom G; appreciatedQuin Brown; Mesmerised, or merely distracted?Amethyst; Hence the title.Andy; LSD - unintentional...? Carlos; Thanks.Tumblewords; A spontaneous thought.Angel; Thank you.
sublime, most definitely!nice.
short yet impressive ! liked it :)
Thanks to:Angie; comment appreciatedJeeves; cheers.Lostmermaid; Thanks for your visit.
good haiku! short and straight to the point! :)
Your last line pulls your haiku together nicely. Well done. Have a great day. Thanks for your visit.
I didn't quite get at first, I like your choice of words, it certainly leads one to thinkthanks for your visit
Thanks to:Leo; mood swings!Michelle Johnson; yes, the bottom line...Lissa; mission accomplished!!!
I always wonder how just 3 lines say what a whole passage is unable to acomplish.Had to re read it to catch it.~Harsha
Hi Maglomaniac; Thanks for your visit.
Thanks Gautami; Delighted you like it!
yes, length doesn't havent anything to do with success..the use of words are powerful...
Thanks One More Believer; A well chosen word can speak volumes.