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Wednesday, July 1, 2009

Love's Me Not?

Posted to Three Word Wednesday
and The Naisaiku Challenge?


Sweet
Nothings whispered
Promise me the love I yearn
BEFORE THE COLLAPSE
Loves yearned for broken promise
Whispers 'Nothing's sweet'

15 comments:

  1. Phew, sweet nothings! Nothing's sweet in love and war, or so they tell me!!

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  2. Nicely done.
    Long time no read.

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  3. this rings true. I read a quote today, "However good or bad a situation is, it will change." - unknown

    so in love it can go forward and backward.

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  4. Oh wow, this took a turn...powerful!

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  5. Great way to move in and out, back and forth in these few lines. Neat!

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  6. Love isn't always sweet, but we can make our own sweetness.

    Nice use of the prompts!

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  7. Everyone wants to be loved. Nice lines here.

    http://fullofcherries.blogspot.com/2009/07/victory.html

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  8. Too often sweet nothings are pie crust promises.. easily made, easily broken.

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  9. Thanks Andy; sweet, fair - either word applies

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  10. Thanks Anthony; There's more to come.

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  11. Thanks to:
    Thom G
    Daily Panic
    Fledgling Poet
    Linda Jacobs
    Tumblewords
    Ann
    Janet Jarell
    Megha
    Amethyst
    PJD

    I'll get around to visiting all of you and comment on your posts.

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