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Sunday, May 4, 2014

Sunday Whirl #159

                                                          PILOT


For Sunday Whirl
Arise! Wings will set you free!
See the truth; seize the moment...!

Sent to heal a broken heart
Darting onwards, dead ahead
Blackbird soars into the night
Light and life in knowing eyes.

12 comments:

  1. Now that's a plane and a pilot i would like to fly with..soar soar soar!

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  2. Very clever to get all the words into such a short piece! Well done!

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  3. I have fond memories of waking to hear the blackbird's song. Those knowing eyes must have peeked through the window!

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  4. Wow... I'm impressed with your economy of words here, Stan!

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  5. Light and life in knowing eyes. Concise and powerful! Excellent!

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  6. Everyone's said it. I love that last line. You are rocking it, Stan!

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  7. Well wordled! I adore short poems. Each of your lines could be a poem. :)

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  8. Brief but filled with life and hope. Good write, Stan,

    Elizabeth

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  9. Well done - superbly crafted and a joy to read.

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