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Sunday, May 4, 2014

Sunday Whirl #159

                                                          PILOT


For Sunday Whirl
Arise! Wings will set you free!
See the truth; seize the moment...!

Sent to heal a broken heart
Darting onwards, dead ahead
Blackbird soars into the night
Light and life in knowing eyes.
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12 comments:

  1. Jae RoseMay 4, 2014 at 6:05 PM

    Now that's a plane and a pilot i would like to fly with..soar soar soar!

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  2. J Cosmo NewberyMay 4, 2014 at 6:21 PM

    A call to arms...uh, wings.

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  3. AnonymousMay 4, 2014 at 6:34 PM

    Very clever to get all the words into such a short piece! Well done!

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  4. Old EggMay 4, 2014 at 7:09 PM

    I have fond memories of waking to hear the blackbird's song. Those knowing eyes must have peeked through the window!

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  5. Laurie KolpMay 4, 2014 at 7:22 PM

    Wow... I'm impressed with your economy of words here, Stan!

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  6. nanMay 4, 2014 at 8:40 PM

    Light and life in knowing eyes. Concise and powerful! Excellent!

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  7. brenda wMay 4, 2014 at 9:23 PM

    Everyone's said it. I love that last line. You are rocking it, Stan!

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  8. AnonymousMay 4, 2014 at 10:04 PM

    Well wordled! I adore short poems. Each of your lines could be a poem. :)

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  9. vivinfranceMay 4, 2014 at 10:30 PM

    Great wordling, Stan.

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  10. Belva Rae StaplesMay 5, 2014 at 2:50 AM

    Fly me to the moon! I love this!

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  11. AnonymousMay 5, 2014 at 6:57 AM

    Brief but filled with life and hope. Good write, Stan,

    Elizabeth

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  12. keiths ramblingsMay 6, 2014 at 4:16 AM

    Well done - superbly crafted and a joy to read.

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