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Saturday, July 20, 2013

WORDLE #118

For Sunday Whirl: Think, Tear, No, Room, Time, Repair, Slate, Driven, Longing, Become, Night, Key, Mesh.

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Think before you shed a tear
There is no room for regret

Time to repair the damage
Your chance to wipe the slate clean

Be driven by your longing
To correct what you've become

Take the fragments of that night
Key those pieces into place

Let your thoughts mesh together...

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27 comments:

  1. Andy SewinaJuly 21, 2013 at 3:32 AM

    Take the fragments of the night - Phew! Now you're talking.

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  2. NankaJuly 21, 2013 at 4:58 PM

    This gels well!!Fragmented pieces put in place and thoughts in a mesh, perfect binding!!

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  3. J Cosmo NewberyJuly 21, 2013 at 6:44 PM

    Mmmm...don't know that I can correct what I have become. Interesting thought though.

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  4. brenda wJuly 21, 2013 at 7:00 PM

    Driven by longing to fix what we've been come... If we can't fix it, we may as well embrace it. I'm loving "fragments of that night."

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  5. veronicaJuly 21, 2013 at 8:57 PM

    I like the sense of possibility in this one. Yes, and the fragments of the night... All very neat and well meshed!

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  6. Ann (bunnygirl)July 21, 2013 at 10:21 PM

    This is what we all should do, but how many assume the challenge?

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  7. AnonymousJuly 21, 2013 at 11:09 PM

    We need the moisture of our tears to wipe the slate clean in the fragments of the night. Loving this one, Stan,

    Elizabeth

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  8. flaubertJuly 22, 2013 at 6:58 AM

    Stan, this is quite profound in every sense. Tears help us release emotions. I enjoyed this a lot.

    Pamela

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  9. Wabi SabiJuly 22, 2013 at 7:22 AM

    So hopeful! So together! If only we remember to push regret out of the picture! As always, your poem is jam packed with thoughts to provoke!!

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  10. Old EggJuly 22, 2013 at 7:00 PM

    It is always a delight to read how effortlessly you have compiled your pieces and this one is no exception.

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  11. Magical Mystical TeacherJuly 22, 2013 at 9:25 PM

    Keying pieces into place is such a powerful image; it speaks of deliberation and forethought.

    A Wee Whirl

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  12. AnonymousJuly 23, 2013 at 3:49 AM

    Oh yeah, fragments of the night. Beautiful, Stan.

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  13. CherylJuly 23, 2013 at 3:54 AM

    I like this, Stan.

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  14. JulesJuly 24, 2013 at 3:44 AM

    Thank you for your visit...makes me feel wanted too.

    Webs that we weave with words ...can be enchantments, declarations and just plain truths. ~Jules

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