Your quick wit and brevity are quite clever. I thought of a doctors office/lab here. I'd most definitly want a second opinion especially if I didn't like the results!
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Stan hey saw you comment on someone's site and had to come see what you were doing. Like the way this poem fits into so many facets of life Great to see your books in the margin
Gosh, you're good, Stan!! Really good.
ReplyDeleteThanks Misky :)
DeleteIt is good to work with friends you can trust.
ReplyDeleteThanks Oldegg :)
DeleteAre they deciding to miss school/work en masse?? That is how I read it and made me smile!! Scanning sick leave notes makes it so much fun!! ;)
ReplyDeleteIf it made you smile, then I'm smiling too :)
DeleteAmazing!
ReplyDeleteThanks Annell :)
DeleteYour quick wit and brevity are quite clever. I thought of a doctors office/lab here. I'd most definitly want a second opinion especially if I didn't like the results!
ReplyDeleteFYI your comment ended up in spam. Not sure if it is just because your are not WP, but I saved you. -
Thank you for your visit!
Thanks Jules :)
DeleteYes, it is amazing how you can get the words all together in a nice short order that is also an enjoyable poem!
ReplyDeleteThanks Marian :)
DeleteYou are really getting good at this Stan. Economy, sense, and a story to boot. Hats off to you!
ReplyDeleteElizabeth
http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2013/07/14/an-observation/
Thanks Elizabeth :)
DeleteLove how you can write such a concise poem with the words, Stan.
ReplyDeletePamela
Thanks Pamela :)
DeleteYou did it again - another concise use of the words!
ReplyDeleteThanks Robyn :)
DeleteStan hey saw you comment on someone's site and had to come see what you were doing.
ReplyDeleteLike the way this poem fits into so many facets of life
Great to see your books in the margin
Cheers from the Moon
Thanks Leslie :)
DeleteWow! You did it again! Brevity is king! (I think my title is longer than your poem!) The Gospel According to a Labrador Retriever
ReplyDeleteLol... Thanks WabiSabi :)
DeletePoet Compactor strikes again! Brava, Stan!
ReplyDeleteThanks Walt :)
DeleteThank goodness for second opinions. Walt is right...you are a wordle compactor.
ReplyDeleteThanks Brenda :)
DeleteImpressive, Stan!
ReplyDeleteThanks Marianne :)
DeletePerfect Stan! How I cracked my head and you've done it in not so many words!
ReplyDeleteHank
Thanks Hank :)
DeleteConcisely wordled. And it makes sense! Thanks for visiting me.
ReplyDeleteShort and succinct!!
ReplyDeletein the shadows, let it be