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Sunday, January 6, 2013

ON THE TWELTH DAY

For Sunday Whirl: Clarity, Practice, Listen, Breath, Giddy, Step, Bitter, Venture, Tumult, Fire, Within, Awake

ROUGH TRADE


Vocal clarity, standard practice
What you preach is pitcher perfect
They listen to your every breath
Getting giddy at each step
Ever better, never bitter
Venture forth, create a tumult
Light a fire within their hearts
Awake a passion... Sell it hard!

23 comments:

  1. hummmm.....this piece makes me wonder? And who is it that has to "sell it hard."

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  2. And what intoxicating liquor is in that pitcher?

    I like the economy of your use of the wordle words.

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  3. Thanks Annell; They say 'life's a pitch' so I guess it applies to everyone...

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  4. Thanks Viv; Dunno, but I'll have a glass... or two...!

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  5. Charisma, for sure. Nice rhythm to the piece. Standard practice, indeed. Ha ha.

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  6. light a fire, awake a passion - great ideas!

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  7. Words every true salesman will relate to!

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  8. Thanks Nan, Robyn, Keith :):):)

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  9. The complete package. "Sell it hard." Ties it all up nicely.

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  10. Sounds a bit like a manager, giving a pep talk. Your brief lines, and repetitive sound also give it the feeling of marching orders. Good one Stan,

    Elizabeth
    http://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/2013/01/06/living-lesson/

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  11. Thanks Teri, Elizabeth, Marian :):):)

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  12. I love the intensity of pace this presents. Well done!

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  13. Stan, I believe it is called charisma. Nicely paced as the others have said. Hope all is well with you.

    Pamela

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  14. So compact and well crafted. Very nice, Stan.

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  15. Tough love? Sometimes working at getting the 'sale' is rewarded when the spark is lit to create action. Good teachers do that for their students.

    Thanks for your visit.

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  16. Love the energy in this short piece!

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  17. I like the way you did this - short and sweet, with a twist.

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  18. Thanks Jules, Tumblewords, Mama Pajama :):):)

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