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Thursday, March 25, 2010

DEVOTION

For Haiku Bones Devotion
And NaiSaiKu Challenge?
And The American Sandwich



HAIKU BONES DEVOTION

I was in a state
North of Philadelphia
West of Devotion


NaiSaiKu

I was in a state
North of Philadelphia
West of Devotion
THE IMMATURE CALL IT LOVE
Far from Devotion
Beyond Philadelphia
I’ve been in that state


AMERICAN INFATUATION

I was in a state, brought about by uncontrollable emotion.
Metaphorically speaking, it lies north of Philadelphia.
The immature call it Love, but it’s somewhere well west of Devotion.


NANO AMERICO^

I was in a state.
Metaphorically speaking, it lies north of Philadelphia.
The immature call it Love.


WALLS + WIRES

I was in a state, brought about by uncontrollable emotion.
North of Philadelphia.
The immature call it Love, but it’s somewhere well west of Devotion.


AMERICAN SENTENCE

There is a state of mind, beyond brotherly love, far from devotion.

7 comments:

  1. Nicely Stan, sounds like Nirvana!

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  2. Wow, I like all the forms of it!

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  3. Thanks Andy; Feels like it too when you're there.
    Fourwindshaiga. I'm still looking for that place, Devotion.

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  4. America is west,
    and mine is Asia
    I've live and die with my own...
    with love and devotion...

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  5. Thanks Inay; Who says 'The West is the best'...?

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  6. Lots of fun here! Nice variations on the theme. I enjoyed these, especially being a native Philadephian!! (Actually, I'm really from just west (wish I could say 'north') of the city of brotherly love.

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  7. Thanks Robin; You have a head start on most of us!

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