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Sunday, September 21, 2008

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ISAN FUNERAL

Mother’s mother
Lies in state;
Serene.

Monks from the Wat
Line the walls;
In prayer,
Chanting mantras
To the
Great Unseen

Male descendants
Sacrifice
Their hair,
Don saffron robes
Marking their
Respect,
Lead the mourners
To the
Holy Field

Solemn faces
Silently
Reflect.

Young coconuts
Spill their
Cleansing yield
On head and face
Of mother’s
Mother

Each one in turn
Takes part in
The Rite;
Grandson, daughter
Sister and
Brother.
Grievers gaze as
Pyre is set
Alight

Five days and nights
Set aside
To mourn
The passing of
Our loved one;
Loved still.
Her memory
Lives on in
Hearts torn
By tragedy
Of death’s
Bitter pill

12 comments:

  1. a ritual of which i have no first hand knowledge so i for one was drawn to it an oddity from which i could not look away... you painted a picture for me that i will be able to remember for quite some time.. thnak you...

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  2. Thanks paisley; It is an, oddly, compelling subject, each culture has its own way of dealing with. This is the Thai Buddhist way - Asians may relate to it more than Westerners.

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  3. Hi Stan, a delicate subject, handled well.

    I love the picture too. Changnoi?

    Andy

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  4. Thanks Andy; It's part of life, unfortunately.
    Yes that's Changnoi - like the rest of us, he too has lost loved ones.

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  5. the short lines in this make it feel like a procession, which complements the theme very well

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  6. Thanks crafty green poet; The same thought struck me after I'd wondered how to present it - the 'procession' wasn't intentional, but I wondered if others would see it that way.

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  7. That almost seemed like a lament. Touching.

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  8. Thanks anthony; I wanted to get a feel of the sadness of the occasion.

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  9. The pace of this is so perfect for a funeral.

    Really, beautiful words for such a sad event.

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  10. Thanks Linda; Sad and beautiful sum up the event perfectly.

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  11. Really got peace from this write.
    I hope you did too. Picture was so expressive. Thanks

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  12. Thanks still; The entire experience is very humbling. The dead are truly celebrated, whatever their status.

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