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Now that really is economical! Much like the truth that some states provide their citizens!
Care in the community came into my head when i saw the prompts...bit of an oxymoron ....a chat with a human...far better for health
I heard the cry of and for the care of the invalid, the elderly, the poor, the dispossessed.And yes, your poem is very economical. I like terseness.BTW typo: fourth line stae - state, dropped the tnice work....Randy
Chats are a good thing, especially in community. We may have been thinking a little along the same lines this morning.
This is my favourite kind of poetry: it says what needs saying and then stops. Bravo.
Well done! Those first two lines...ouch.
Excellent use of words!
Now that really is economical! Much like the truth that some states provide their citizens!
ReplyDeleteCare in the community came into my head when i saw the prompts...bit of an oxymoron ....a chat with a human...far better for health
ReplyDeleteI heard the cry of and for the care of the invalid, the elderly, the poor, the dispossessed.
ReplyDeleteAnd yes, your poem is very economical. I like terseness.
BTW typo: fourth line stae - state, dropped the t
nice work....Randy
Chats are a good thing, especially in community. We may have been thinking a little along the same lines this morning.
ReplyDeleteThis is my favourite kind of poetry: it says what needs saying and then stops. Bravo.
ReplyDeleteWell done! Those first two lines...ouch.
ReplyDeleteExcellent use of words!
ReplyDelete