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Now that really is economical! Much like the truth that some states provide their citizens!
Care in the community came into my head when i saw the prompts...bit of an oxymoron ....a chat with a human...far better for health
I heard the cry of and for the care of the invalid, the elderly, the poor, the dispossessed.And yes, your poem is very economical. I like terseness.BTW typo: fourth line stae - state, dropped the tnice work....Randy
Chats are a good thing, especially in community. We may have been thinking a little along the same lines this morning.
This is my favourite kind of poetry: it says what needs saying and then stops. Bravo.
Well done! Those first two lines...ouch.
Excellent use of words!