"If she had dreamed at all...' seems such a tragedy... and then she ends up 'lost' This, while it made me sad, made me wonder..... and hunger for more of 'her' story!
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I like this. I think thought that it doesn't matter where you are if one is lost in the space of their mind. And sometimes that is a very tricky place to find our way out of!
Very smoothly crafted Stan! Now she's lost! Hopefully she finds her way!
ReplyDeleteHank
Thanks Hank :)
DeleteI suppose we must give up the things on the floors below in order to stay on teh top.
ReplyDeleteI guess so, thanks for stopping by :)
DeleteI can feel...life on the top floor was killing her by degrees. I wrote about "she" too. Nice poeming.
ReplyDeleteThanks Sabra :)
DeleteIs she everywoman?
ReplyDeleteElizabeth
That I'll never know... Thanks Elizabeth :)
Delete"If she had dreamed at all...' seems such a tragedy... and then she ends up 'lost' This, while it made me sad, made me wonder..... and hunger for more of 'her' story!
ReplyDeleteThanks WabiSabi :)
Deletethis saddened me and that pleases me :-)
ReplyDeleteThanks Mariya :)
DeleteLove this one!
ReplyDeleteThanks Annell :)
DeleteEnjoyed this and I too hope she finds her way.
ReplyDeleteThanks :)
DeleteOh dear! To me it all got too much for her and the top floor was an invitation to go flying to oblivion.
ReplyDeleteYou're right :)
DeleteWonderful. Succinct and authentic. Reminds me of the woman in the film Jasmine Blue.
ReplyDeleteThanks Mishla :)
DeleteGreat opening, Stan, to a maybe a hopeless situation. Well done.
ReplyDeletePamela
Thanks Pamela :)
DeleteIf the bottom is crowded then the top can be very lonely!! A price one pays!!
ReplyDeleteThanks Nanka :)
DeleteObviously, she found a way to escape the confines of top-floor living. The question is, however: Is she better off lost in space?
ReplyDeleteCould be... Thanks MMT :)
DeleteA salutory lesson, that one.
ReplyDeleteThanks JCN :)
DeleteSo off she flew.... A bit bleak. but good use of the wordle words. They slipped in there seamlessly.
ReplyDeleteThanks Veronica :)
DeleteThanks for your visit to my continuing story...I've not gotten to this weeks (123) list yet. Trying to catch up first.
ReplyDeleteI like this. I think thought that it doesn't matter where you are if one is lost in the space of their mind. And sometimes that is a very tricky place to find our way out of!