Without a shadow of doubt
Baking bread to earn your salt
Makes perfect sense...
But does it...?
Have a second thought...
This sends signals to your head...
Then you think...
Blame gravity for the way
In which even best laid plans
Fall down hard and lose their thread...
Now you think...
No shoes required to walk this landscape...!
Well done! I like it!ReplyDelete
Thanks Annell :)_ReplyDelete
That's an interesting perspective.ReplyDelete
Thanks JCN :)Delete
Very cool..nicely woven tale..Loved the way you culminated it..no shoes required....Well done..ReplyDelete
My Wordle here:
Thanks Ramesh :)Delete
Loving this poem! Standout favorite - "No shoes required to walk this landscape" - Great feel! :)ReplyDelete
Thanks Pearl :)Delete
Did the bread fall? ;)ReplyDelete
Didn't even rise...! Thanks Brenda :)Delete
Sans shoes is certainly one way (and often the best way) to go!ReplyDelete
Whirling with Robert and Me
Barefoot works for me... Thanks MMT :)Delete
Excellent!! I hopped jumped and skipped through this poem without my shoes on too!! I admire how you handle the wordle words so effortlessly!!ReplyDelete
Thanks Nanka :)Delete
interesting... did the bread not rise? is it like a rock you can walk on?!ReplyDelete
Lol... Thanks Veronica :)Delete
All that work and then it doesn't rise? One of the reasons I don't bake bread anymore. And yes, going barefoot is the very best. This was a delight to read.ReplyDelete
Thanks Elizabeth :)Delete
Barefoot? Yes, indeed!ReplyDelete
Thanks WabiSabi :)Delete
Nice flow,Stan! It came off as a snippet from an ongoing novel in the making!ReplyDelete
Thanks Hank :)Delete
That deep breath lifts you up like the rising bread so certainly no shoes are needed with such inspiration.ReplyDelete
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Stan, I love your perspective on things, always different.ReplyDelete
Thanks Pamela :)Delete
Very intriguing thought...ReplyDelete
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Interesting read, hmm it fell, did you remember to add the yeast ;)ReplyDelete
Yeast...! Thanks Cathy :)Delete
Interesting poem that I keep rereading.ReplyDelete
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nice one; luv the worded pausesReplyDelete
Thanks Gillena :)Delete
Love this. Barefoot work well for me. So does bread.ReplyDelete