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Sunday, February 21, 2010

WHEN PIGS FLY

For Sunday Scribblings – ‘When Pigs Fly’

My first attempt at a Syllable Sestina


NEVER IN A MONTH OF SUNDAYS

Sir Ten shows, else he’s free
Free purchase…? Well hello…!
No-fee Elephant sez
‘This omen, freezer hell’
Tell his verse – no spree then?
…When Hell freezes over!
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6 comments:

  1. Andy SewinaFebruary 21, 2010 at 10:13 PM

    Phew, if pigs could fly I wouldn't have thought of this!
    Ratcatcher

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  2. Stan SkiFebruary 22, 2010 at 6:15 AM

    Thanks Andy; Still not sure if the form is correct.

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  3. Archna SharmaFebruary 23, 2010 at 12:11 AM

    Wow! I've never played with one of these, but your first attempt was fabulous. The "free, freezer, omen, hell" was great! Awesome!

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  4. Stan SkiFebruary 23, 2010 at 6:19 AM

    Thanks Archna; I might try more.

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  5. Dee MartinFebruary 23, 2010 at 6:46 AM

    I am in awe sir!

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  6. Stan SkiFebruary 23, 2010 at 6:52 AM

    Thanks Dee; I get the feeling I did OK.

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