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Thursday, February 4, 2010

FRANTIC, LURCH, ODOR

For Three Word Wednesday

FRANTIC, LURCH, ODOR

Odour of decay
Triggers lurch towards window
Frantic dash for air

14 comments:

  1. Thanks Thom; Such a relief to open that window.

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  2. Ah, sometimes I have to open the window too.

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  3. I can so see it. Biology II--our incubator produced a rotten egg. Great image.

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  4. Who ate the baked beans, hmmm??
    Nice piece...glad someone went down this track!!

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  5. That was a great haiku! love how you convey so much in so little words,

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  6. This reminds me, I hope my dogs haven't left me a surprise to clean up after I get home from work. A tad bit cold today to open the window but it beats the alternative. Nice work!

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  7. I think we've all had a moment like this...you described it perfectly in your haiku!

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  8. Thanks to:
    Anthony; Windows have so many uses.
    Lilibeth; Come on, don't blame the incubator.
    Whitesnake; Yeah, me... it happens.
    Crybbe666; Don't like baked beans - better results from...
    Just Someone; The quiet ones are the kilers.
    Jay; I hear you.
    Tumblewords; Yes it does - you can laugh later but at the time...
    Sweetest; I've never known so many people admit to it.

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  9. Nicely Stan, This is one game I missed. Had to drive down to Plymouth for the funeral on Wednesday, it's Friday morning now, (just) and just got back!

    aka Andy Sewina

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  10. Too funny. Or scary. And in seventeen little syllables. Great job.

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  11. our incubator produced a rotten egg. Great image.

    Work From Home

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