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In the panic that ensued
you and a thousand others
who thought they had room to talk
discovered there was no choice
Couldn't believe our own eyes...
As heat became more like burn
they shed not a drop of sweat
always believing he would
perform a miracle, man
and, boy, did it get them high
when she said the snag was fixed
Damn...some snags are best left unsolved...
ReplyDeleteOooh this one has a great rhythym and seductive draw to know the rest of the story
ReplyDeleteWow, that's deep! What a great read.
ReplyDeleteYou packed a lot into a little bit of space. Intriguing, concise, and great voice.
ReplyDeleteluv this little teaser
ReplyDeleteMerry Christmas
Much Love...
Very amusing with the hint that mother earth is female not some pompous male!
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