For Sunday Whirl:
A poem with no name
Makes no sense at all to me
As a title is so vital...
If only because
It strips away a string
Of strictly false uncertainties
A speech in broken English
Soiled sheets, confusing signs
All connected, all infected...
And all because
Goblins drink from goblets
Served by gobshites doing lines
Split dependencies...how can you fix that doesn't have a name but shouts loudly..hmm..now I'm thinking ;)
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much love...
Damn the gobshites!
ReplyDeleteWe may not think a title is appropriate but will give authors leeway to have their reasons. Without one a piece is incomplete and almost rude to the prospective reader.
ReplyDeleteThought provoking use of the Wordle words :-)
ReplyDeleteIf only because
ReplyDeleteIt strips away a string
Of strictly false uncertainties
ha! As for one who doesn't like titles, I like keeping you on toes. And great poem too
Good one. A poem without a title is like a person without a name
ReplyDeleteThis is so clever!
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