Copyright © Stan Ski 2008 - 2015
Sweet.And short. And to the point. I like it. :)
Thanks Veronica :)
very much enjoyed the image of stirring a "stubborn mind" - :)
Thanks Pearl :)
So concise - I can never do that with the wordle words! A stubborn mind can create many wounds.
Thanks Robyn :)
Thanks Irene :)
A true economy of words, nothing wasted!A Dozen Whirls
Thanks MMT :)
conjured happy memories in my mind.
Thanks Viv :)
I love when the words work with minimal addition. I also like your speaker's admonition to deliberately 'jar' memories, good and bad.Your close up elephant is enchanting.
Thanks Margo :)
I always enjoy economy of words. I like your use of conjured and jar memories.
Thanks Sabra :)
Very concise and stubborn minds hide a lot of wounds,Elizabeth
Thanks Elizabeth :)
Your piece ripples out in echoes of the origin piece for the words. It's strong and concise.
Thanks Brenda :)
A stubborn mind often forgets the good things..i am glad those tree houses and sandcastles came back..
Thanks Jaerose :)
How many times do we end up back in the country of jars? Stubbornness and hurry could be to blame. But I am not so sure anymore. Great write.
Thanks Teri :)
Wonderfully done with so few words!!!
Thanks Annell :)
It is amazing how concise one can be and still tell a story. Thanks for your visit :)
Thanks Jules :)
Brilliant use of the words, Stan! Short and so succinct!
Thanks Marianne :)
contemplative. brilliant! i think of someone caught in another country in their own mind.
Thanks Paige :)
What a great effort only 22 words in total! Is that your best achievement so far?
Thanks Old Egg... Think so :)
Really well done Stan. Love the “stirred a stubborn mind” idea. Gosh I so admire the concise whirls. You and Walt really master that. I haven’t got a hope in hell; I just blather on and on...
Well done, indeed. I especially like: "memoriesthat disguised the woundof yesterday;"
Thanks Mad Kane :)
Sand castles! Why didn't I think of sand castles? I like it.
Thanks JCM :)
minimalismvery well donei like it.Cheers!JzN
Thanks JzN :)
Economic and to the point, Stan. Good poem.Pamela
Thanks Pamela )
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