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Monday, September 21, 2009

Walk The Walk

For Monday Poetry Train Revisited

And NaiSaiKu challenge?

And The American Sandwich

A NaiSaiKu, an American Sandwich and finally, an American Sentence

Again you ask me
Who? What? When? Where? How? Why? Which?
Who? What? When? Where? How? Why? Which?
Don’t ask me again

I will not deny I understand the reason why you went away.
As you closed the door, I tried to speak, but there was nothing left to say.
Lifelong love was just another broken promise you made yesterday.

If you talk the talk, you have to walk the walk, or that’s the price you pay.


  1. I like the center one best, but reading them all in sequence makes for a fascinating glimpse into the death of a relationship. It makes me think of a series of short films strung together at a film festival.

  2. Great writing, I like how they all fit together.

  3. All of these read very nicely - your timing is bang on!

  4. This was interesting !!

    Loved how you wrote this...And the way it ends is great....

  5. Thanks to:
    Julia; all good things come to an end.
    Jane; But who is to blame?
    Gautami; All except the people involved.
    Janet; when the time comes...
    Songofsea; That's how it goes.