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Wednesday, February 13, 2013

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For d'verse poets open night #83

PERFECT SENSES



Boost Sound and Vision with minimum surgery
Make the decision with maximum urgency
Balanced perceptions are worth the expense
Makes perfect sense...

Upgrade your eyesight to Hi Definition
Download the vibe, don't disguise the transmission
Enhance your reception with Special Effects
Better than sex...

Sound all around via DTS implant
3D surround sound accessed in an instant
Forget the distraction of background distortion
It's all in proportion...

Digital features for creatures of habit
On-Demand access, just reach out and grab it
Must-have improvements, the best without doubt
Go check it out...
Check it out
Check it out
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36 comments:

  1. anthonynorthFebruary 13, 2013 at 5:54 PM

    Definitely live wired there. Nice one.

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  2. Brian MillerFebruary 13, 2013 at 6:22 PM

    nice thumping beat to this one...
    must have improvements...scares me a bit...always something to upgrade to ...our things...or ourselves...

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  3. AnonymousFebruary 13, 2013 at 6:47 PM

    If you haven't used this as a performance piece, you should. Great writing here, superb beat driving it on.

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  4. AnonymousFebruary 13, 2013 at 7:04 PM

    I hear an odd, disturbing, yet fascinating flute and drum here. Original and arresting!

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  5. annell4February 13, 2013 at 8:23 PM

    And pretty soon you will be able to get the smart watch. I wonder...maybe my life is not smart enough for the "smart things."

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  6. Pat HattFebruary 13, 2013 at 8:29 PM

    Great beat as all the toys come to meet and greet, have to eep up with the joneses after all.

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  7. ScarletFebruary 13, 2013 at 9:05 PM

    Original voice, I like the mad rush for technological improvements ~ This scares me frankly ~

    Nice to meet you ~

    Grace

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  8. Laurie KolpFebruary 13, 2013 at 9:18 PM

    The rhythm works with the enhanced subject... I feel intensity in a heartbeat throughout.

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  9. colleenFebruary 13, 2013 at 9:56 PM

    Check ... Check ... Sound check ... Nicely themed and rhythmic, a good spoken word poem.

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  10. MaryFebruary 13, 2013 at 10:26 PM

    Always something new..something newer...newest. Obsolete in a year. Scary how fast technology moves.

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  11. Stan SkiFebruary 13, 2013 at 10:35 PM

    Nice to meet you too, Grace :)

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  12. ClaudiaFebruary 14, 2013 at 12:08 AM

    ha...our crazy digital world isn't it...sometimes i just wanna go back to the guitar, played on a street corner....great seeing you at dVerse stan

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  13. Jennifer WagnerFebruary 14, 2013 at 12:12 AM

    Oh the pressure to upgrade...never ends--this cycle of technological advancement. Nice piece.

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  14. Stan SkiFebruary 14, 2013 at 1:47 AM

    Nice one Claudia :)

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  15. vivinfranceFebruary 14, 2013 at 4:00 AM

    Oh how I wish I could! Vision blurring, hearing muffled, actors mumbling. I could go on, but I like your fantasy better!

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  16. RMPFebruary 14, 2013 at 7:47 AM

    I'm not sure I could handle the world in HD. I liked this piece. it vibrated quite nicely.

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  17. Stan SkiFebruary 14, 2013 at 3:06 PM

    Thanks RMP :)

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  18. LauraFebruary 15, 2013 at 3:23 AM

    there's always more... when do we just say "enough... what we have is plenty,"?

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    1. Stan SkiFebruary 15, 2013 at 4:16 AM

      'Enough' is just not in our nature...
      Cheers Laura :)

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  19. lucychiliFebruary 15, 2013 at 9:20 AM

    i have a friend who is deaf who would love this kind of moderated recovery. i can also imagine others who would like it too. well described.

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  20. flaubertFebruary 16, 2013 at 3:56 AM

    Stan, I believe we aren't far from that world. I enjoyed your perception of the "not so far" future. Maybe just in time when my body parts start to fail, lol. Thanks for reading piece this week.

    Pamela

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    1. Stan SkiFebruary 16, 2013 at 3:20 PM

      The used to say 'Tomorrow never comes'... Now it's more a case of 'Tomorrow's obsolete'...!

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  21. Madeleine Begun KaneFebruary 17, 2013 at 3:11 PM

    Well done, I can really relate!

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  22. Stan SkiFebruary 17, 2013 at 3:30 PM

    Go check it out...!

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