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Tuesday, August 17, 2010

ISAN HEARTLAND

FOR BIG TENT POETRY


This week’s promptThis week’s prompt is a Wordle. The words are taken from one of a well-regarded poet’s published poems, which will be named (and linked to!) in Friday’s Come One, Come All post.
Hope you enjoy this week’s challenge to use any number of the words in your Big Tent Poetry poem this week!









ISAN HEARTLAND

Deep in the Isan heartland
Beyond banana, pineapple
Across untended rice fields
Baked hard by the summer sun
The unforgiving landscape
In cynical dry-season mood
Questions the wisdom of cars
That risk its impassable route

Our focus zeroes in on
The slow trickle of a stream
Where once flowed a full-blown river
Supplying diesel-driven pumps
Used to moisten rice in plant
Via discarded rubber hose pipes
Or home-made earthenware pots
Hand-crafted by silk-clad women
Deep in the Isan heartland

34 comments:

  1. seems you managed to fit in all the words...wow...hat off!

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  2. Thanks Claudia; A couple of tricky ones in there, but I just about got them all to fit.

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  4. Thanks Sweatha; Sounds interesting.

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  5. Nice panoramic snapshot of the Isan heartland, of which I know nothing, yet now feel as if I do.

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  6. Thanks Paul; The edible landscape of north eastern Thailand.

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  7. You always manage to transport us to an unfamiliar world, and make it visible.

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  8. Great job with the prompt. It flows naturally and takes us to Thailand with hints of tastes and smells. I liked how you used "zeroes in."

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  9. You painted a vivid landscape Stan..well done.

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  10. I'm focusing in on that stream that once was a river. Hope that rain fills it soon!

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  11. 'The unforgiving landscape' with compassionate people. You've painted a vivid picture, Stan.

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  12. I agree with Derrick, was coming to post a comment about the picture you created. It's almost like a painting in my mind. Well done, Stan!

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  13. Vivid imagery of a different land that seems less far away because of your fantastic use of the words. Salute!

    Elizabeth

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  14. Stan I love the imagery in this!
    Pamela

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  15. Thanks to:
    ViV; I hope I do it justice.
    Nan; "Zeroes" was The hardest to fit in.
    Irene: Said as seen...
    Mary; Rain is a-coming, oh yeah...
    Derrick; All the better to see...
    Brenda; Just a brushstroke...
    Elizabeth; Right on my doorstep...
    Pamela; A snapshot of a life cycle.

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  16. A wonderful snapshot portrayed in this poem! Excellent post! =)

    -Weasel

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  17. I did not even notice the wordle words... I was so fascinated with this poem! Delightful!

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  18. home-made earthenware pots
    Hand-crafted by silk-clad women

    Lovely picture this conjures up...

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  19. Thanks to:
    Weasel; Country life in the dry season.
    Diane; Some tricky words, but I got them all in.
    Jinksy; A slight exaggeration, but sounds better than 'factory made' and 'denim clad'.

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  20. Not just smoothly worked, it's got it all.
    I like the landscape as unforgiving and cynical.

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  21. I lke the landscape as unforgiving and hard as well.

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  22. Thanks to:
    B; It's attitude changes quickly, once the rain comes.
    Rall; It's softening by the day now.

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  23. you have painted a wonderful ladscape with your words Stanski

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  24. Thanks Wayne; The landscape was already there - the words happened to fit the scene.

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  25. Wow. I'd never know this was a Wordle poem. The world fits it to a tee, or rather versa visa. Thanks for being able to see and to put these all together.

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  26. Thanks Deb; Sometimes it just works out that way.

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  27. Thanks Gautami; I just write as I see.

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  28. lovely poem, Stan :) well sewed together.. liked it..! even I got the whole lot in.. :D

    Leo's

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  29. Wonderful! I feel as if I've taken a visual journey to a landscape I didn't know.

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  30. I feel as if I have just traveled with you to the spot you describe. So beautifully done!

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  31. Thanks to:
    Leo; I had plenty of thread.
    Tumblewords; Glad you enjoyed the journey and liked what you saw.
    Cynthia; That stream is becoming a river again now the rain has started.

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  32. It's a part of the world I have little knowledge of, so thanks for this vivid glimpse.

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  33. Thanks Francis; It's a world away from the cities its produce feeds.

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