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and lost its balance, too, perhaps!
For sure! Thanks Misky :)
very nice. the end was a nice surprise that made me laugh.
Thank you :)
I love the way you seek the essence!
Thanks Annell :)
Strong and concise. Love the feeling of feathery light.
Thanks Brenda :)
When you've had too much elixir, those potholes can be murder. Like your economy with these words...I found them a bit difficult.Elizabeth
Thanks Elizabeth :)
Economic use of the words, Stan. Pamela
Thanks Pamela :)
The Master of Succinct! I love the ending!
Thanks WabiSabi :)
And now you've got me wondering what that scarlet fluid was! Good use of the Wordle.
Thanks Victoria :)
Wonderful and I love the ending!
Thanks Daphne :)
Am I glad those days of carousing are over...what a waste. Very succinctly put.
Thanks Oldegg :)
Hahaha!! I had visions of a strong healthy elephant walking (waddling) down one of our potholed city street!! :DI marvel at how you can get an idea fitted with the twelve words in just four lines!! Awesome!!
Thanks Nanka :)
In Panama, I met a hole in the road such as you describe. It was a harrowing experience!Two-Word Whirl
Thanks MMT :)
...time ago I got in deep hole with water under snow...oh interesting encounter!
Thanks Humbird :)
I love this! So concise and well written with a twist ending.
Thanks Sara :)
A lesson learned, perhaps.
Still learning... Thanks Veronica :)