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Saturday, August 3, 2013

WORDLE #120

For Sunday Whirl: Shadow, Bread, Salt, Sense, Breath, Sends, Head, Gravity, Plans, Thread, Shoes, Landscape.

FORETHOUGHT


You think...

Without a shadow of doubt
Baking bread to earn your salt
Makes perfect sense...

But does it...?

Deep breath...

Have a second thought...

This sends signals to your head...

Then you think...

Blame gravity for the way
In which even best laid plans
Fall down hard and lose their thread...

Now you think...

No shoes required to walk this landscape...!

35 comments:

  1. That's an interesting perspective.

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  2. Very cool..nicely woven tale..Loved the way you culminated it..no shoes required....Well done..

    My Wordle here:

    http://rameshsood.blogspot.in/2013/08/in-vast-landscape-of-myth.html

    RS:)

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  3. Loving this poem! Standout favorite - "No shoes required to walk this landscape" - Great feel! :)

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    1. Didn't even rise...! Thanks Brenda :)

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  5. Sans shoes is certainly one way (and often the best way) to go!

    Whirling with Robert and Me

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    1. Barefoot works for me... Thanks MMT :)

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  6. Excellent!! I hopped jumped and skipped through this poem without my shoes on too!! I admire how you handle the wordle words so effortlessly!!

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  7. interesting... did the bread not rise? is it like a rock you can walk on?!

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  8. All that work and then it doesn't rise? One of the reasons I don't bake bread anymore. And yes, going barefoot is the very best. This was a delight to read.

    Elizabeth

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  9. Nice flow,Stan! It came off as a snippet from an ongoing novel in the making!

    Hank

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  10. That deep breath lifts you up like the rising bread so certainly no shoes are needed with such inspiration.

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  11. Stan, I love your perspective on things, always different.

    Pamela

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  12. Interesting read, hmm it fell, did you remember to add the yeast ;)

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  13. Interesting poem that I keep rereading.

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  14. nice one; luv the worded pauses

    much love...

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  15. Love this. Barefoot work well for me. So does bread.

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