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Sunday, September 8, 2013

WORDLE #125

For Sunday Whirl

WHATEVER HAPPENED TO...?


You didn't pay to change the answer
Only used magic to intrigue her
Made her the center of your attention
Took her to another dimension
Ticked her boxes and rung her bell
Stains on your conscience have stories to tell

33 comments:

  1. I really like that last line. Stains on your conscience have stories to tell.

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  2. Damned stains won't rub off or wash out will they? It is good to see we went down the same path as I don't feel quite so guilty now. As usual your succinctness is much admired.

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  3. Oh my - giggles and sighs ... "took her to another dimesnions, ticked her boxes and rung her bell" love the final rhyme which just ties up a wonderful poem with a delightful bow - "stains on your conscience" leaving those stories rippling into the distance ... one not soon forgotten.

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  4. A story well told!! The last line excellent!! No holy dips in the ganges can erase it!!

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  5. This seems a little sad, sometime things happen, maybe not what was intented?

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  6. Nicely done. Sharp and to the point. Excellent use of the words.

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  7. The rhyme acts like a salve to ease the pain of conscience. I love this one, Stan.

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  8. Well woven and great use of the words. I too, love that final line...

    Elizabeth

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  9. well...we all have those stains...life :)

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  10. Oh, Stan, I like this. Excellent rhyme scheme.

    Pamela

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  11. Ha! My friend Adam was boasting a couple weeks ago how he has the magic touch with women. Apparently you just tell them they look beautiful. Oh yeah? :)

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    1. Or something just as subtle... Thanks Veronica :)

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  12. Wonderful! I love the succinctness and the last line is great!

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  13. Straight forward and unflinching. Perfect.

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  14. This reminds me of the song 'Love Potion Number 9' - only a tad bit more dramatic.
    How many of us would go to such lengths to get the person we think we want?
    There are words to another song that come to mind...
    "How is it you do the Voodoo you do so well?"

    Thanks for stopping by, Jules

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  15. "stains on you conscience have stories to tell" well done.

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