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Sunday, August 18, 2013

WORDLE #122

For Sunday Whirl: If, Dreamed, Vision, Nestled, Heart, Years, Persuaded, Stay, Tribute, Period, Floor, Degrees, Space.

LOST IN SPACE


If she'd dreamed at all
That vision would have nestled
In her heart for years

Persuaded to stay
She paid tribute to her man
For a period

Life on the top floor
Was killing her by degrees
Now she's lost in space

31 comments:

  1. Very smoothly crafted Stan! Now she's lost! Hopefully she finds her way!

    Hank

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  2. I suppose we must give up the things on the floors below in order to stay on teh top.

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    1. I guess so, thanks for stopping by :)

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  3. I can feel...life on the top floor was killing her by degrees. I wrote about "she" too. Nice poeming.

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    1. That I'll never know... Thanks Elizabeth :)

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  5. "If she had dreamed at all...' seems such a tragedy... and then she ends up 'lost' This, while it made me sad, made me wonder..... and hunger for more of 'her' story!

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  6. this saddened me and that pleases me :-)

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  7. Enjoyed this and I too hope she finds her way.

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  8. Oh dear! To me it all got too much for her and the top floor was an invitation to go flying to oblivion.

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  9. Wonderful. Succinct and authentic. Reminds me of the woman in the film Jasmine Blue.

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  10. Great opening, Stan, to a maybe a hopeless situation. Well done.

    Pamela

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  11. If the bottom is crowded then the top can be very lonely!! A price one pays!!

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  12. Obviously, she found a way to escape the confines of top-floor living. The question is, however: Is she better off lost in space?

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  13. So off she flew.... A bit bleak. but good use of the wordle words. They slipped in there seamlessly.

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  14. Thanks for your visit to my continuing story...I've not gotten to this weeks (123) list yet. Trying to catch up first.

    I like this. I think thought that it doesn't matter where you are if one is lost in the space of their mind. And sometimes that is a very tricky place to find our way out of!

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