Hi Stan, nicely thought out. Not too sure about the anagram, the best I could do was Eclair, pit, bogy.
Here's my 3ww (Poetic flash fiction in 51 syllables)
No need to brag about it, said Dawn when her pet robot crashed the car. I know it was icy, Dave chipped in, but the Bat-mobile is unique. In his polite voice Dawn's robot said, okay I'll pay to get it fixed. 25012013/2
This happens often in life and it really is worth bragging about...except that by definition, one who can remain polite in such situations isn't the boastful sort.
Ah, so often the case. Nice one.
ReplyDeleteThanks Anthony :)
ReplyDeleteI know that feeling!
ReplyDeleteI've known quite a few like that.
ReplyDeletethat happens Well written
ReplyDeleteMakes you cringe, doesn't it!
ReplyDeleteWarmth doesn't always trade souls...
ReplyDeleteThanks everyone :)
ReplyDeleteStraight to the point! I think we all may have experienced this once.
ReplyDeleteGreat piece.
Blessings
Thanks Bethe77 :)
ReplyDeleteI really think you should brag! Well done!
ReplyDeleteSilk and Sky
Hi Stan, nicely thought out. Not too sure about the anagram, the best I could do was Eclair, pit, bogy.
ReplyDeleteHere's my 3ww (Poetic flash fiction in 51 syllables)
No need to brag about it, said Dawn when her pet robot crashed the car. I know it was icy, Dave chipped in, but the Bat-mobile is unique. In his polite voice Dawn's robot said, okay I'll pay to get it fixed.
25012013/2
This happens often in life and it really is worth bragging about...except that by definition, one who can remain polite in such situations isn't the boastful sort.
ReplyDeleteThanks MMT, Andy, Ann :):):)
ReplyDeleteHi Stan, I've posted my 3WW HERE www.theamericansandwich.blogspot.com.
ReplyDeleteOh well aren't you such a model of self restraint and compusure!:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Rall; does it show? :)
ReplyDeleteSure does Mr Cool:)
DeleteThe 'but' is a problem.. But (!) it always is.
ReplyDeleteI believe I have been on both sides of that coin...
ReplyDeleteWell done haiku!