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Wednesday, July 1, 2009

Love's Me Not?

Posted to Three Word Wednesday
and The Naisaiku Challenge?

Sweet Nothings whispered
Promise me the love I yearn
BEFORE THE COLLAPSE
Loves yearned for broken promise
Whispers 'Nothing's sweet'
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15 comments:

  1. andyJuly 1, 2009 at 8:36 PM

    Phew, sweet nothings! Nothing's sweet in love and war, or so they tell me!!

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  2. anthonynorthJuly 1, 2009 at 8:48 PM

    Nicely done.
    Long time no read.

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  3. Thom GabrukiewiczJuly 1, 2009 at 8:53 PM

    Welcome, welcome. Great lines here.

    Ritual

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  4. Daily PanicJuly 2, 2009 at 2:06 AM

    this rings true. I read a quote today, "However good or bad a situation is, it will change." - unknown

    so in love it can go forward and backward.

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  5. Sherri B.July 2, 2009 at 5:57 AM

    Oh wow, this took a turn...powerful!

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  6. Linda JacobsJuly 2, 2009 at 8:17 AM

    Excellent twist!

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  7. Tumblewords:July 2, 2009 at 9:12 AM

    Great way to move in and out, back and forth in these few lines. Neat!

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  8. Ann (bunnygirl)July 2, 2009 at 1:04 PM

    Love isn't always sweet, but we can make our own sweetness.

    Nice use of the prompts!

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  9. Janet JarrellJuly 3, 2009 at 7:06 AM

    Yummy.

    I love the language...

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  10. MeghaJuly 4, 2009 at 12:35 AM

    Everyone wants to be loved. Nice lines here.

    http://fullofcherries.blogspot.com/2009/07/victory.html

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  11. VJuly 4, 2009 at 5:17 AM

    Loved the twist!

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  12. PJDJuly 4, 2009 at 12:35 PM

    Too often sweet nothings are pie crust promises.. easily made, easily broken.

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  13. Stan SkiJuly 7, 2009 at 7:24 AM

    Thanks Andy; sweet, fair - either word applies

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  14. Stan SkiJuly 7, 2009 at 7:25 AM

    Thanks Anthony; There's more to come.

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  15. Stan SkiJuly 7, 2009 at 7:30 AM

    Thanks to:
    Thom G
    Daily Panic
    Fledgling Poet
    Linda Jacobs
    Tumblewords
    Ann
    Janet Jarell
    Megha
    Amethyst
    PJD

    I'll get around to visiting all of you and comment on your posts.

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