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Monday, November 17, 2008

TOP SOUND

COLOUR OF SOUND

One stanza of my recent
(click the link)
TOP Marketplace Poetry post
Was loosely based on a incident
At school, years ago.


The teacher said

'Write 1000 words, inspired by the phrase
If silence is golden, what colour is sound?’

I wrote:


If silence is ‘golden’
I’ll keep my ‘silver’ tongue
In the place it belongs
Inside my tight shut mouth


He gave me an ‘A’, and said
‘Next time, keep it to just 1000 words’


WITHOUT A SOUND

“Watch my lips,” she said to me
And mouthed a word, a blasphemy
Commandment broken
Though word not spoken
She’ll burn in hell eternally



SOUND AS A POUND

I went around to sound him out
About a pound he owed me for a drink
Off like a hound, he crowned my day
Let’s say I frowned, perhaps not what you think
So I’ll be bound he wound up drunk
Sunk to the ground, leaving mine at the bar
But when I found he’d downed my glass
Alas, I turned round from my empty jar
Curses abound, astound and resound
Sound asleep, run aground like a jeep
Paradise found? A burial mound?
A hound in a heap, surrounded by sheep
Sound as a pound, he’d downed the round
Clowned around, and wound up on the ground
Sorrows drowned, or victory crowned
When he comes around, I’ll claim back my pound.


VOWEL SOUND

I think E said ‘straw’
But U know that’s just like A
O, is it really?”

17 comments:

  1. It's sheer joy and deep pleasure to actually watch someone having this much fun with words. And the variety of uses and sounds are a credit to your ability.

    thanks for my smile today,

    Elizabeth

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  2. Thanks Elizabeth; Your visit is appreciated, and if it made you smile, then that's what makes the exercise worthwhile.

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  3. The color of Sound is brilliant, especially for a schoolchild. Way to go!

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  4. Thanks Susan Helene Gottfried; I guess we're all still at 'school', though no longer children.

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  5. the first recitation of that memory was perfection... and i am so glad the teacher could see past "the rules"....

    the second leaves me wondering,, what word did she mouth??? what ever it was,, if words are a prerequisite for hell,,, save me a seat.......

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  6. Thanks Paisley; Sometimes we're able to teach the teacher; raely do they acknowledge it.

    It may have been just a thought - I'll save you the place next to mine.

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  7. Some brilliant pieces here - and great fun, too.

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  8. Hi Stan, an indepth look at sound! Looks like your link at TOP has been deleted, I'll re-enter you!

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  9. Thanks to:
    Anthony North; I couldn't get audible sound onto the Blog, so I explored 'sound' a bit.
    Andy; Just a few examples of how we use the word 'sound'. Sometimes I enter thr link and it's gone when I go back.

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  10. These are great - each one better than the preceding one. Visible sounds. Very nice.
    here's the link to poetry org that you couldn't access on my blog. I have no idea what happened...
    http://www.poetryfoundation.org/audio/12%20North%20of%20Mist.mp3

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  11. Thanks Tumblewords; I'll check the link - your selection has intrigued me.

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  12. lol, i dont know but the Vowel SOund make me smile :-)

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  13. Thanks Totomai; I O U a debt of gratitude.

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  14. This was a fun post! Playing with words!

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  15. Thanks Linda; Sound in everything - even silence.

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  16. ahh, freedom of expression is everything...

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  17. Thanks One More Believer; I couldn't agree with you more.

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