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Sunday, June 22, 2014

Wordle #166










For Sunday Whirl


DESPICABLE

Praying for a loaded gun,
the Tarot cards promises
levitate alluringly,
kiss me, seduce me... plague me;
dark thoughts dancing in my face
flowing like rivers of blood.
...Finally the penny drops

Dreadful creature, am I not...?

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6 comments:

  1. Jae RoseJune 22, 2014 at 5:42 PM

    Ooh..nicely done..the way that question is posed sends a shiver..despicable me indeed..

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  2. Old EggJune 22, 2014 at 5:57 PM

    We are all that dark creature sometimes. Who really knows us. Great dark piece of writing.

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  3. keiths ramblingsJune 22, 2014 at 6:59 PM

    You really are, but clever with it! Nice one.

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  4. annell4June 22, 2014 at 7:18 PM

    I love the way you did it so neat!

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  5. Belva Rae StaplesJune 23, 2014 at 4:55 AM

    Tight and terrifying!

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  6. CathyJune 23, 2014 at 8:09 AM

    Oh I love this, love how you end this with a question too. Are you dreadful, hmm maybe more devilish .

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