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Tuesday, March 10, 2009

Heart

For Naisaiku Challenge 4


The (gift (life) brings) us
Wrapped (in (a (heart) beat); love) true
Hearts (make (love) last) long


The gift life brings us
Wrapped in a heartbeat; love true
HEARTS MAKE LOVE LAST LONG
Wrapped in a heartbeat; love true
The gift life brings us

Gift life brings
In a heartbeat; love
MAKE LOVE LAST
In a heart beat; love
Gift life brings

Life
A heartbeat
LOVE
A heartbeat
Life

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Heart
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Heart
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9 comments:

  1. JeevesMarch 10, 2009 at 12:04 PM

    I like this heartbeat

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  2. totomaiMarch 10, 2009 at 7:48 PM

    its continually beating, beats continually lol just trying :-)

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  3. gautami tripathyMarch 10, 2009 at 9:02 PM

    Liked all the versions!

    Twister

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  4. AnonymousMarch 11, 2009 at 9:33 AM

    Thanks to:
    Jeeves; Essential for life and love.
    Totomai; As long as it doesn't stop.
    Gautami Tripathy; Strip away the layers to reveal the heart.

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  5. AnonymousMarch 11, 2009 at 5:10 PM

    i liked the first one .. kind of picture poetry .. all the rest were as sweet !!

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  6. Linda JacobsMarch 12, 2009 at 3:43 AM

    I like how they all blend together and the fact that what is left is just a heart!

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  7. AnonymousMarch 16, 2009 at 5:55 AM

    Thanks to:
    Pretty Me!!; Just trying to get to the heart of the matter.
    Linda Jacobs; It all revolves around the heart.

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  8. AnonymousMarch 16, 2009 at 7:08 PM

    Thanks Stan, hope to see you this week in Manchester!

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  9. deepteshpoetryMarch 30, 2009 at 1:45 PM

    Wow innovative 2 say the least.Remeber...I'm deeptesh 4m the poetrytrain....do chk out my new poem too.

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