tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post951876105759660989..comments2023-10-12T20:59:49.473+07:00Comments on Elephant Small: DAY 16 - NAPOWRIMO 2011Stan Skihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-12911643721137188582011-04-18T19:05:54.900+07:002011-04-18T19:05:54.900+07:00This one is interesting.This one is interesting.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-41175906383541211662011-04-17T14:34:31.291+07:002011-04-17T14:34:31.291+07:00Thanks Mad Kane; I reckon we all can.Thanks Mad Kane; I reckon we all can.Stan Skihttp://says-sir-ten.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-19901112391926736032011-04-17T13:59:53.565+07:002011-04-17T13:59:53.565+07:00Thanks to:
Gloria; 'They' do say a lot, an...Thanks to:<br />Gloria; 'They' do say a lot, and half of it is BS.<br />Andy; Cheers Andy.<br />Whenwordsescape; They're everywhere we go.Stan Skihttp://says-sir-ten.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-55716532136963645542011-04-17T13:55:24.775+07:002011-04-17T13:55:24.775+07:00Good job. I can relate!Good job. I can relate!Madeleine Begun Kanehttp://www.madkane.com/humor_blog/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-24430413313936280412011-04-17T09:32:25.907+07:002011-04-17T09:32:25.907+07:00I like that there are more than just a couple stan...I like that there are more than just a couple stanzas to get the point across...seems to emphasize just how often we hear this kind of "line"! Well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-39410720821799283992011-04-17T07:57:08.191+07:002011-04-17T07:57:08.191+07:00Clever stuff Stan!Clever stuff Stan!Andy Sewinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10023449074796269533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-55066990858305230432011-04-17T04:20:07.509+07:002011-04-17T04:20:07.509+07:00'They' say so much more between the lines....'They' say so much more between the lines. Well written Stan.Gloriahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08555391165844772063noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-53195227624803677802011-04-17T02:00:01.042+07:002011-04-17T02:00:01.042+07:00Thanks to:
Christine; What 'they' often pr...Thanks to:<br />Christine; What 'they' often present is a little bit of this , a bit of that, and not much of anything... <br />Mr.Walker; Most of them can't talk the talk, never mind walk the walk.<br />Pamela; I think we all have.Stan Skihttp://says-sir-ten.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-63420174134193263242011-04-17T01:29:31.531+07:002011-04-17T01:29:31.531+07:00Love the last stanza, Stan. I have heard that bit ...Love the last stanza, Stan. I have heard that bit more than once in my life. Nicely done.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-17856216329770013442011-04-17T01:28:56.453+07:002011-04-17T01:28:56.453+07:00Some people have no tact and some people have no s...Some people have no tact and some people have no shame. Stan, an excellent take on communication and how its abused. And you last two lines, a perfect ending.Mr. Walkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05507517064398624652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-39198762674478250062011-04-16T23:28:33.413+07:002011-04-16T23:28:33.413+07:00Like the way you begin each phrase. Fabulous read....Like the way you begin each phrase. Fabulous read.Christinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10433262472050607402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-85778512335328263252011-04-16T23:09:06.155+07:002011-04-16T23:09:06.155+07:00Thanks to:
Elizabeth; I got similar images while w...Thanks to:<br />Elizabeth; I got similar images while writing it.<br />Brenda; I'm pleased you found words from my post, and I will post a piece from your wordle - but it will be posted for Monday (time difference) :)Stan Skihttp://says-sir-ten.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-11548044041537311022011-04-16T22:57:00.027+07:002011-04-16T22:57:00.027+07:00The meter and sound in this piece work, Stan. I k...The meter and sound in this piece work, Stan. I kept going back to look for rhymes that were only hinted at. Well executed! I chose four words from this for a wordle I'll post on the Bozone tomorrow. <br />~Brendabrenda whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-41765073018028949412011-04-16T22:35:01.700+07:002011-04-16T22:35:01.700+07:00As I read through your words, I saw flashing image...As I read through your words, I saw flashing images of faces, all with their mouths open, saying much the same thing. No names, no meaning. Worse are the ones who no longer believe in what they are selling and you can hear it their voice, see it in their eyes. <br /><br />ElizabethElizabethhttp://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-21746273232169639122011-04-16T18:48:46.772+07:002011-04-16T18:48:46.772+07:00Thanks tp:
Dave; Glad you liked it.
Ron; Some peop...Thanks tp:<br />Dave; Glad you liked it.<br />Ron; Some people...Stan Skihttp://says-sir-ten.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-76167921419789031392011-04-16T18:13:45.348+07:002011-04-16T18:13:45.348+07:00Nothing "delivered by spokesmen & designe...Nothing "delivered by spokesmen & designed for flattery" can be good. Would that we just tune it all out.<br /><br />I loved the rhythm established here. Great stuff.Ron.http://rlavalette.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-64059530577835703502011-04-16T17:45:12.553+07:002011-04-16T17:45:12.553+07:00Very clever. I enjoyed this immensely.Very clever. I enjoyed this immensely.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-76010493701481107062011-04-16T15:22:21.709+07:002011-04-16T15:22:21.709+07:00Thanks Anthony; And the motive is always for their...Thanks Anthony; And the motive is always for their own benefit.Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-95251884929232472011-04-16T15:06:24.238+07:002011-04-16T15:06:24.238+07:00You've nailed it here. People say so much to g...You've nailed it here. People say so much to get us on their side - whatever they want, sell, try to persuade, etc.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-12558497937090822482011-04-16T14:38:31.840+07:002011-04-16T14:38:31.840+07:00Thanks to:
Viv; Many people have offered me incent...Thanks to:<br />Viv; Many people have offered me incentives for various reasons over the years. This combines some of the techniques used and my thoughts on them... not worth the paper they're not printed on...!<br />Iself; These kinds of promises are never quite what they seem.Stan Skihttp://says-sir-ten.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-86584225733482553002011-04-16T14:23:25.477+07:002011-04-16T14:23:25.477+07:00Amen!
"I only know that what they say has not...Amen!<br />"I only know that what they say has not come true for me." (Buddy Holly)Iselfhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08601870100584844946noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-41493613194182015352011-04-16T14:10:54.800+07:002011-04-16T14:10:54.800+07:00Who said what to you? An election leaflet perhaps...Who said what to you? An election leaflet perhaps? Whatever, your reply is pungent and full of exciting writing.vivinfrancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.com