tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post9167772164559540719..comments2023-10-12T20:59:49.473+07:00Comments on Elephant Small: TOP Internal Rhymes 2Stan Skihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-5677336024149561702008-10-18T08:27:00.000+07:002008-10-18T08:27:00.000+07:00Thanks Linda; I thought it would be difficult to h...Thanks Linda; I thought it would be difficult to hold the continuity, but it just seemed to work.Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-6691054239639688492008-10-17T07:22:00.000+07:002008-10-17T07:22:00.000+07:00I love the feel of this poem in my mouth! All tha...I love the feel of this poem in my mouth! All that internal rhyme is just delicious!Linda Jacobshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14459940700516084069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-60988148224133995202008-10-17T05:54:00.000+07:002008-10-17T05:54:00.000+07:00Thanks to:Andy; Don't hold your breath for the alb...Thanks to:<BR/>Andy; Don't hold your breath for the album!<BR/>Anthony North; So do I, and it really is to the musicians.<BR/>Paisley; I thought it was more appropriate to the prompt.<BR/>Gautami Tripathy; Put a chill jazz track behind it and it's almost Hip-Hop.<BR/>Tumblewords; I'm glad you liked it - thank you.Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-78012678836469587192008-10-17T01:42:00.000+07:002008-10-17T01:42:00.000+07:00Still singing along - stellar!Still singing along - stellar!Tumblewords:https://www.blogger.com/profile/04279038951489894119noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-35496778316543820262008-10-16T21:27:00.000+07:002008-10-16T21:27:00.000+07:00internal rhyming done in a very interesting way!yo...internal rhyming done in a very interesting way!<BR/><BR/><A HREF="http://firmlyrooted.blogspot.com/2008/10/your-undoing.html" REL="nofollow">your undoing</A>Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-12307562118526429612008-10-16T18:07:00.000+07:002008-10-16T18:07:00.000+07:00the rhythm on this is perfection... as rhyme goes ...the rhythm on this is perfection... as rhyme goes i like it better than the previous,, just seems catchier,, almost a song.....paisleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08231453820728399262noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-75853913435187466612008-10-16T15:56:00.001+07:002008-10-16T15:56:00.001+07:00I love jazz. And you make it a way of life, here.I love jazz. And you make it a way of life, here.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-49121099768317426152008-10-16T15:56:00.000+07:002008-10-16T15:56:00.000+07:00Yeah, theres some good internal rhymes going on he...Yeah, theres some good internal rhymes going on here Stan, sorry to hear about the yackety Sax though.<BR/><BR/>This has a really strong start to it!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com