tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post8124122522206745761..comments2023-10-12T20:59:49.473+07:00Comments on Elephant Small: S.A.W.Stan Skihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-75396964641667138902010-07-23T14:07:35.893+07:002010-07-23T14:07:35.893+07:00Thanks Jingle; Let's give it a go!Thanks Jingle; Let's give it a go!Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-74876642455455554242010-07-23T03:26:46.975+07:002010-07-23T03:26:46.975+07:00Welcome to Thursday Poets Rally week 25, which run...Welcome to Thursday Poets Rally week 25, which run July 22-July 28,, you are represented as fresh poets:<br /><br />Sign in here as New participant:<br />http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/07/21/126/<br /><br />Leave your poem link here and comment for 18 poets from participants list New 2 you:<br />http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/07/21/thursday-poets-rally-week-25-july-22-july-28/<br /><br />Hope that you enjoy the fun!<br />Happy Thursday!<br /><br />ignore if you want to stay out.Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01546696605935159862noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-27312958266985357632010-07-22T08:47:26.334+07:002010-07-22T08:47:26.334+07:00Thanks to:
Julie; Lying awake at night, thoughts d...Thanks to:<br />Julie; Lying awake at night, thoughts drip like water, but oftren theyr'e only clear as mud.<br />Linda; 'Sleep on it' - much easier said than done...Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-15915113471942561252010-07-22T08:21:51.496+07:002010-07-22T08:21:51.496+07:00Oh, what a big drip. LOL -- seriously, Stan, this ...Oh, what a big drip. LOL -- seriously, Stan, this is amazing. I love what you did with the line breaks, and -- although the surreal is evident -- the reality is that you've transmitted many waking/sleeping thoughts that are familiar to many people. Bravo.Linda Goinhttp://lindagoin.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-25101205183567967912010-07-22T08:15:17.949+07:002010-07-22T08:15:17.949+07:00LOL. This reminded me of my son, upon hearing a ra...LOL. This reminded me of my son, upon hearing a radio program today said, "This is a sound effect of water"... but he couldn't leave it at that, "when the drop splashes...." so specific, just like your delightfully engaging (albeit to you, perhaps plain annoying!) poem!<br /><br /><a href="http://juliejordanscott.typepad.com/jjspoetry/2010/07/golden-tada.html" rel="nofollow"> My attempt at this week's prompt. </a>Julie Jordan Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06558015761690505791noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-56216404371823767202010-07-22T08:05:00.720+07:002010-07-22T08:05:00.720+07:00Thanks to:
Pamela; Often the cause is those though...Thanks to:<br />Pamela; Often the cause is those thoughts that drip from our minds, refusing to develop.<br />CRStone; The more we dwell on the distractions, the more they irritate us.<br />Mary; Tonight... CNN... Jay Leno... zzz ;)Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-63881019636926351822010-07-22T07:52:41.177+07:002010-07-22T07:52:41.177+07:00Been there, done that with dripping water, Stan. ...Been there, done that with dripping water, Stan. Drives me crazy. Now I hear very little though, as I fall asleep listening to CNN!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-85617413985068804142010-07-21T23:47:54.498+07:002010-07-21T23:47:54.498+07:00Well composed. These little distractions arise at ...Well composed. These little distractions arise at our hour of peace- sleep, editing and so on. Strong write.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-22198946463191217492010-07-21T22:43:37.413+07:002010-07-21T22:43:37.413+07:00Stan insomnia is a horrible thing it seems as if e...Stan insomnia is a horrible thing it seems as if every little sound is magnified 10 times. I love this stream of thoughts!<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-37252945661221065302010-07-21T22:10:30.824+07:002010-07-21T22:10:30.824+07:00Thanks Brenda; Dripping taps,. barking dogs; we ha...Thanks Brenda; Dripping taps,. barking dogs; we have to blame something.Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-47607142885475599862010-07-21T21:06:37.800+07:002010-07-21T21:06:37.800+07:00This is great Stan! Last night for me it was a ba...This is great Stan! Last night for me it was a barking dog. You've hit a universal here. Brilliant piece, I love it.<br />~Brendabrenda whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-8603171181581205042010-07-21T19:56:11.744+07:002010-07-21T19:56:11.744+07:00Thanks Barbara; This is the final version. What pr...Thanks Barbara; This is the final version. What preceded it was just a mess of words.Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-46122547237368457042010-07-21T19:50:06.116+07:002010-07-21T19:50:06.116+07:00chuckle. been there.
Until we got it fixed, I put...chuckle. been there.<br />Until we got it fixed, I put a watering can under the drip, which was just irregular enough to be distracting. the tone changes with the amount of water in the can.<br /><br />I do like that drippy little section leading to "shatter"barbarahttp://briarcat.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-36207389728163619252010-07-21T18:57:00.525+07:002010-07-21T18:57:00.525+07:00Thanks Rob; And it either stops of its own accord....Thanks Rob; And it either stops of its own accord... or the floodgates open.Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-18515820761378022292010-07-21T16:20:28.809+07:002010-07-21T16:20:28.809+07:00but on and on it drips into incredibleness (a comb...but on and on it drips into <i>incredibleness</i> (a combination word bringing together incredible and edibleness) and it gives birth to your wonderful poem, no longer hungry but stuffed with deliciousness and exhaustion... loved it! ;)<br /><br />...rob<br /><a href="http://www.image-verse.com/stream" rel="nofollow"><i>Image & Verse</i></a>rob kistnerhttp://www.image-verse.com/streamnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-68099366314568221552010-07-21T13:24:14.136+07:002010-07-21T13:24:14.136+07:00Thanks Dianne; When 'T' was suggested, it ...Thanks Dianne; When 'T' was suggested, it stuck... and I started with 'Tonight' and thought along the lines of insomnia.Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-32080309988973718952010-07-21T12:56:38.179+07:002010-07-21T12:56:38.179+07:00i love it. I will try it SAW. for my desk tomorrow...i love it. I will try it SAW. for my desk tomorrow. great poem!Diannehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18323454057921441274noreply@blogger.com