tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post6824368999380148834..comments2023-10-12T20:59:49.473+07:00Comments on Elephant Small: DAY 17 - ELEMENTSStan Skihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-61672312858853781352010-04-18T11:37:05.859+07:002010-04-18T11:37:05.859+07:00Thanks Wayne. I suppose it's just an expansion...Thanks Wayne. I suppose it's just an expansion (or contaction) of the Big Bang Theory.Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-91108964377486316262010-04-18T08:30:32.804+07:002010-04-18T08:30:32.804+07:00nice one stan...looks like we both going down the...nice one stan...looks like we both going down the same road on this poem....anyways thanks again for your wordsWayne Pitchkohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15376196523487344143noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-13537404905281120022010-04-18T08:06:21.282+07:002010-04-18T08:06:21.282+07:00Thanks to:
Andy; It wasn't intended as the tit...Thanks to:<br />Andy; It wasn't intended as the title, but it could be read that way. I checked out that link. Must be loads more I never knew...<br />Shari; That WAS what I intended!Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-44589105061305808682010-04-18T07:21:20.475+07:002010-04-18T07:21:20.475+07:00Hi Stan:
I really enjoyed traveling through this p...Hi Stan:<br />I really enjoyed traveling through this poem. Your layout worked perfectly to slow me down, to decrease that automatic anticipation of what comes next. Awesome!<br />ShariShari Smothershttp://slstellingstories.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-44046789854226793402010-04-18T06:56:46.923+07:002010-04-18T06:56:46.923+07:00Nicely Stan, I like the way you put the TITLE in t...Nicely Stan, I like the way you put the TITLE in the middle.<br /><br />btw, here's the link to your great, great, great grandmother, <a href="http://www.victorianturkishbath.org/_6DIRECTORY/AtoZEstab/England/Winch/WinchEng.htm" rel="nofollow">Mrs Butcher</a> who ran the Turkish bath.Andy Sewinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14765633868539628820noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-69416259541407415302010-04-18T05:01:02.141+07:002010-04-18T05:01:02.141+07:00Thanks Wanda; I'll remember that.Thanks Wanda; I'll remember that.Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-25840466239660705222010-04-18T04:55:51.774+07:002010-04-18T04:55:51.774+07:00OK - you have ten times more comments than I do an...OK - you have ten times more comments than I do and your work is quite good. But you need to tighten your lines for such a linear poem. To do that place your cursor at the end of each line and use shift + enter. Better presentation.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13823109424519657612noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-56708037967865806462010-04-18T04:39:55.780+07:002010-04-18T04:39:55.780+07:00Thanks to:
Derrick; Just a thought...
Mark; If so,...Thanks to:<br />Derrick; Just a thought...<br />Mark; If so, I'll see you there - but you have to look on the bright side...<br />Poemblaze; To make a relatively short piece appear much longer...<br />Dan; Basic...Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-20975669272516743702010-04-18T03:04:09.875+07:002010-04-18T03:04:09.875+07:00No doubt: Carbon.No doubt: Carbon.Danhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10434158889970912596noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-80598269981398218192010-04-18T01:40:39.820+07:002010-04-18T01:40:39.820+07:00I really liked this one. the long string of the p...I really liked this one. the long string of the poem works well.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-48138308162323827102010-04-17T23:23:52.413+07:002010-04-17T23:23:52.413+07:00Finally got the black text to appear on the white ...Finally got the black text to appear on the white back ground. Not sure what happened. I like your brevity list of the chemical elements followed by elements of reason and logic and ultimately metaphysical elements of self reflexive thought. It's like a chain reaction of synaptic transmissions, but "if my head explodes with dark forebodings soon..."<br /><br />~Markmarkooliohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08274475767714546790noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-51105115626725819642010-04-17T20:19:24.403+07:002010-04-17T20:19:24.403+07:00A history of our time, in 78(?) lines. Elementary,...A history of our time, in 78(?) lines. Elementary, Stan.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00861397533660827678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-47174193207223547972010-04-17T16:08:51.178+07:002010-04-17T16:08:51.178+07:00Your not on your own Rob...Your not on your own Rob...Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-91465415776075188162010-04-17T15:03:27.866+07:002010-04-17T15:03:27.866+07:00I getting to be dumber than a rock the older I get...I getting to be dumber than a rock the older I get... ;)rob kistnerhttp://image-verse.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-50435400418315637352010-04-17T14:59:06.748+07:002010-04-17T14:59:06.748+07:00Thanks Rob; An element of indecision in laptops......Thanks Rob; An element of indecision in laptops...? ... very slightly older, but still none the wiser...Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-71119144018625141402010-04-17T14:52:43.779+07:002010-04-17T14:52:43.779+07:00Stan - it shows up fine on my quad-processor CAD d...Stan - it shows up fine on my quad-processor CAD design tower, just not on my laptop?<br /><br />Who the hell knows... ;)rob kistnerhttp://image-verse.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-37012277261973661302010-04-17T14:47:00.138+07:002010-04-17T14:47:00.138+07:00Thanks Pamela; I's... elementary...;)
Thanks R...Thanks Pamela; I's... elementary...;)<br />Thanks Rob; You're the 2nd to say same. I went back to draft and double checked - seemed ok and I'm seeing in b&w...Dunno...???Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-3826992218496535972010-04-17T14:36:13.535+07:002010-04-17T14:36:13.535+07:00this is really a strong bit of writing Stan...
.....this is really a strong bit of writing Stan...<br /><br />...on my laptop computer screen your letters for your poem here are white, and very difficult to read on the light gray background. I am going to go check it on my quad-processor CAD design tower and let you know what I see...rob kistnerhttp://www.image-verse.com/napowrimo-17-memoriesnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-75719532293048242072010-04-17T14:25:54.957+07:002010-04-17T14:25:54.957+07:00Stan,
You do know how to make one move thru so man...Stan,<br />You do know how to make one move thru so many perceptions. Excellent!<br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-34115706096731281422010-04-17T13:50:36.057+07:002010-04-17T13:50:36.057+07:00Thanks Lucychili; Yes. It's questioning our si...Thanks Lucychili; Yes. It's questioning our significance in terms of infinity.Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-12651725968849702342010-04-17T13:13:01.144+07:002010-04-17T13:13:01.144+07:00yes the elemental and the infinite
feel like they ...yes the elemental and the infinite<br />feel like they stretch our human<br />scale in both directionslucychilihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06519163424062626658noreply@blogger.com