tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post335084032439962935..comments2023-10-12T20:59:49.473+07:00Comments on Elephant Small: SEASONStan Skihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-36276581737256950742011-05-15T21:36:26.330+07:002011-05-15T21:36:26.330+07:00amazed, lovely tale.
check out short story slam a...amazed, lovely tale.<br /><br />check out short story slam and make a submission today.Bluebell Books Twitter Clubhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02346482636849975765noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-67438187446954343892011-05-12T18:13:59.753+07:002011-05-12T18:13:59.753+07:00ooh yes, London's winter twilight.
great poemooh yes, London's winter twilight.<br />great poemlucychilihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06519163424062626658noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-65312053806269872702011-05-10T12:16:00.563+07:002011-05-10T12:16:00.563+07:00Thanks to:
Anna;
Amy;Thanks to:<br />Anna;<br />Amy;Stan Skihttp://says-sir-ten.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-47809421986717761272011-05-10T12:00:54.722+07:002011-05-10T12:00:54.722+07:00Stan, loved your "whirling wall of whiteness....Stan, loved your "whirling wall of whiteness." Lots of alliteration, in fact, and very pleasing. Wishing you dreams that are more fun, though...! Amy<br />http://sharplittlepencil.wordpress.com/2011/05/09/spring-to-life-again/Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-38965897359071324812011-05-09T14:32:03.060+07:002011-05-09T14:32:03.060+07:00Lovely write. I can remember the days - before ce...Lovely write. I can remember the days - before central heating - when waking in the morning and the 'jet of steam' exiting my mouth - or have I misunderstood you?<br /><br />Anna :o]Anna :o]http://puzzelicious.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-64169459160589053802011-05-08T14:19:57.652+07:002011-05-08T14:19:57.652+07:00Thanks to
Andy; Thanks for stopping by.
Judy; The...Thanks to <br />Andy; Thanks for stopping by.<br />Judy; There's lots more - before and after.<br />Andy; Last time I said that, I got a different reaction!Stan Skihttp://says-sir-ten.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-9263061231359205352011-05-08T07:22:11.665+07:002011-05-08T07:22:11.665+07:00"I'm still asleep", I said out loud,..."I'm still asleep", I said out loud, immediately realising I wasn't. - brilliant words!!Andy Sewinahttp://properjoes.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-29161044494604529182011-05-08T04:28:47.791+07:002011-05-08T04:28:47.791+07:00I got cold as I read this! What a great piece of f...I got cold as I read this! What a great piece of flash fiction. I hope you will expand it. I want to know what happens.Judy Roneyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05439992575221937268noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-10963154153584833302011-05-08T03:31:37.615+07:002011-05-08T03:31:37.615+07:00I've read this a couple of times and there'...I've read this a couple of times and there's something eerie about it. Gives me the shivers (no pun intended).<br /><br />Written beautifully all the same.The Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00667034322952126127noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-1158315270925810952011-05-08T02:53:06.797+07:002011-05-08T02:53:06.797+07:00Thanks to:
Pamela; Hot and wet, or hot and dry is...Thanks to: <br />Pamela; Hot and wet, or hot and dry is what I've been used to. <br />Jinksy; Yes, you have to get quality sleep.Stan Skihttp://says-sir-ten.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-68328244998574290712011-05-08T02:30:04.162+07:002011-05-08T02:30:04.162+07:00Cold guarantees restless sleep, I agree - especial...Cold guarantees restless sleep, I agree - especially feet, I've discovered. If they're cold when I get into bed, I can say bye bye to byebyes! LOLJinksyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01686101468214361004noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-68449136122254965852011-05-08T01:40:16.679+07:002011-05-08T01:40:16.679+07:00Love this, Stan. You have brought back some memori...Love this, Stan. You have brought back some memories of those dark winter days. We don't have them here in Mexico, and now I am quite sure I don't really miss them:) however, I do miss the change of seasons. Excellent writing.<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-8625068580123747642011-05-07T23:12:57.021+07:002011-05-07T23:12:57.021+07:00Thanks to:
Brenda; I'm describing an actual ev...Thanks to:<br />Brenda; I'm describing an actual event, which is always useful for that feeling of realism.<br />Viv; I can make more available with the right prompt.Stan Skihttp://says-sir-ten.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-4155026153356481162011-05-07T22:04:34.835+07:002011-05-07T22:04:34.835+07:00Aha! I was going to ask for more, and I find you ...Aha! I was going to ask for more, and I find you have more ready. Please can we see it - your scene is intriguing, and beautifully written.vivinfrancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-86275239053436147252011-05-07T21:59:21.459+07:002011-05-07T21:59:21.459+07:00Stan, The disorientation of waking and cold capti...Stan, The disorientation of waking and cold captivate the reader. Visual and visceral.<br />~brendabrenda whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00846306414656375463noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-62195559979690785262011-05-07T21:07:27.709+07:002011-05-07T21:07:27.709+07:00Thanks Paula; This is a short extract from a much ...Thanks Paula; This is a short extract from a much larger work.Stan Skihttp://says-sir-ten.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-36084857046196378962011-05-07T20:51:33.394+07:002011-05-07T20:51:33.394+07:00Thanks Anthony; Dec 2010 was coldest on record, wh...Thanks Anthony; Dec 2010 was coldest on record, while April 2011 was warmest on record - in UK... Crazy...!Stan Skihttp://says-sir-ten.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-88158481647350466222011-05-07T20:47:12.531+07:002011-05-07T20:47:12.531+07:00What a vivid picture you've painted...I haven&...What a vivid picture you've painted...I haven't read any of your work beyond that of NaPoWriMo, so I don't know if this is a departure from style, but I enjoyed it very much. I'm always captivated by your words, Stan. <br />~PaulaAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-3774203722737116222011-05-07T20:42:13.492+07:002011-05-07T20:42:13.492+07:00And there have been some cold ones in recent years...And there have been some cold ones in recent years over here. Great prose.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-68798156819649744302011-05-07T20:31:04.488+07:002011-05-07T20:31:04.488+07:00Thanks Mariya; He's hoping so too...Thanks Mariya; He's hoping so too...Stan Skihttp://says-sir-ten.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-13336374519193881322011-05-07T20:27:10.081+07:002011-05-07T20:27:10.081+07:00Sometimes, I feel cold even in summer, so ... your...Sometimes, I feel cold even in summer, so ... your description definitely sent some shivers down. Yet, I hope, if your guy falls asleep again, "she" will warm him ;-)Mariya Kolevahttp://www.phoenix-em.com/mariyakoleva/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-4194706387578265192011-05-07T20:14:16.627+07:002011-05-07T20:14:16.627+07:00Thanks Mary; At least winter's over now.Thanks Mary; At least winter's over now.Stan Skihttp://says-sir-ten.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-23904136139922412652011-05-07T20:01:58.920+07:002011-05-07T20:01:58.920+07:00You have set quite an icy scene here, Stan. I am ...You have set quite an icy scene here, Stan. I am definitely familiar with those bleak winter days.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.com