tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post1591331920120667404..comments2023-10-12T20:59:49.473+07:00Comments on Elephant Small: DAY 18 - NAPOWRIMO 2011Stan Skihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-5670357577082941632011-04-19T14:08:52.029+07:002011-04-19T14:08:52.029+07:00Thanks to:
Gloria; I was quite pleased with the ou...Thanks to:<br />Gloria; I was quite pleased with the outcome.<br />Whenwordsescape; Compact and fluent was my aim.Stan Skihttp://says-sir-ten.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-71456591159420650602011-04-19T06:23:44.326+07:002011-04-19T06:23:44.326+07:00Great job incorporating all the wordle words in su...Great job incorporating all the wordle words in such a compact piece...not forced at all!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-63772011877943285902011-04-19T04:36:07.636+07:002011-04-19T04:36:07.636+07:00This sadly doesn't sound like a very happy ann...This sadly doesn't sound like a very happy anniversary. Excellent imagery in the final lines.Gloriahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08555391165844772063noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-69327431264786315292011-04-19T01:05:18.049+07:002011-04-19T01:05:18.049+07:00Thanks to:
Pamela; It started as something else, b...Thanks to:<br />Pamela; It started as something else, but a few amendments turned it into this.<br />Elizabeth; I saw the images it provoked and concentrated on them.Stan Skihttp://says-sir-ten.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-54675202443779501322011-04-19T00:00:47.309+07:002011-04-19T00:00:47.309+07:00I like the poem, how it is written with the short ...I like the poem, how it is written with the short descriptive lines. Got wound up in the images and didn't really look for the wordle words. Very attention getting and effective,<br /><br />ElizabethElizabethhttp://soulsmusic.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-80068128713594840792011-04-18T22:56:12.497+07:002011-04-18T22:56:12.497+07:00Stan, this is so well written, I didn't even n...Stan, this is so well written, I didn't even notice the wordle words. The last two lines are dark, yet beautiful. <br />"As she recounts the incident…<br />The cause of those silver scars"<br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-26868612728410186832011-04-18T22:43:10.818+07:002011-04-18T22:43:10.818+07:00Thanks Andy; Some of them were words I'd used ...Thanks Andy; Some of them were words I'd used before... :)Stan Skihttp://says-sir-ten.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-30079396800673549632011-04-18T21:56:15.302+07:002011-04-18T21:56:15.302+07:00Nicely done Stan, you used the words so well!Nicely done Stan, you used the words so well!Andy Sewinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10023449074796269533noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-71140957017794364752011-04-18T20:59:42.291+07:002011-04-18T20:59:42.291+07:00Thanks Mr.Walker; Not necessarily a sinister cause...Thanks Mr.Walker; Not necessarily a sinister cause - just one that she won't forgive...Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-78632465047306836402011-04-18T20:47:48.727+07:002011-04-18T20:47:48.727+07:00Dark, but well-written. I can just see her sitting...Dark, but well-written. I can just see her sitting there, staring at that unopened package. I like that the last two lines just hint - you leave it to our imaginations.Mr. Walkerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05507517064398624652noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-61422802903331199042011-04-18T20:46:22.306+07:002011-04-18T20:46:22.306+07:00Thanks I'mnotaverse; Things like this happen.....Thanks I'mnotaverse; Things like this happen...Stan Skihttp://says-sir-ten.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-18603980145715447352011-04-18T19:04:26.581+07:002011-04-18T19:04:26.581+07:00A little menacing...I like it.A little menacing...I like it.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-37629347862746100082011-04-18T19:04:12.842+07:002011-04-18T19:04:12.842+07:00Thanks Viv; No worries Viv, it's pure fiction....Thanks Viv; No worries Viv, it's pure fiction.Stan Skihttp://says-sir-ten.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-45581530078429567432011-04-18T17:24:06.255+07:002011-04-18T17:24:06.255+07:00It does. I do hope this isn't auto-biographic...It does. I do hope this isn't auto-biographical! If it is, my illusions are shattered.vivinfrancehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07388722600118753457noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-75112447285331561632011-04-18T15:17:19.303+07:002011-04-18T15:17:19.303+07:00Thanks Dave; I played about with the order of the ...Thanks Dave; I played about with the order of the lines, and thought it sounded better this way.Stan Skihttp://says-sir-ten.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-90645919920116604812011-04-18T15:12:05.029+07:002011-04-18T15:12:05.029+07:00Love that last line.Love that last line.Dave Kinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08430484174826768488noreply@blogger.com