tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post1413944660443963503..comments2023-10-12T20:59:49.473+07:00Comments on Elephant Small: OPEN LINK NIGHT #87Stan Skihttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-50439532717129141912013-03-15T14:33:10.237+07:002013-03-15T14:33:10.237+07:00I like the flow of this poem, with one thing rolli...I like the flow of this poem, with one thing rolling into another.Heidihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02757679752138734026noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-89003637787922932232013-03-13T15:04:07.749+07:002013-03-13T15:04:07.749+07:00Thanks Pamela :)Thanks Pamela :)Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-72733309098505463182013-03-13T15:03:15.720+07:002013-03-13T15:03:15.720+07:00Thanks Write Girl :)Thanks Write Girl :)Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-83258207271237401612013-03-13T15:02:45.469+07:002013-03-13T15:02:45.469+07:00Thanks Ayala :)Thanks Ayala :)Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-14052511623866169732013-03-13T15:02:23.020+07:002013-03-13T15:02:23.020+07:00Thanks Kimolisa :)Thanks Kimolisa :)Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-17468784452856122012013-03-13T15:01:54.235+07:002013-03-13T15:01:54.235+07:00Thanks Mary :)Thanks Mary :)Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-64534585977142054262013-03-13T15:01:30.746+07:002013-03-13T15:01:30.746+07:00Thanks Nilanjana :)Thanks Nilanjana :)Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-76628847742288048302013-03-13T15:00:59.042+07:002013-03-13T15:00:59.042+07:00Thanks Brian :)Thanks Brian :)Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-36735584674912834782013-03-13T14:59:33.042+07:002013-03-13T14:59:33.042+07:00Thanks Anthony :)Thanks Anthony :)Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-13647476109892948072013-03-13T14:59:02.615+07:002013-03-13T14:59:02.615+07:00Thanks Claudia :)Thanks Claudia :)Stan Skihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11963655096635414472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-72918201889977374372013-03-13T08:26:09.661+07:002013-03-13T08:26:09.661+07:00And the wheel goes round and round, Stan. Good wri...And the wheel goes round and round, Stan. Good write on how sometimes we simply go on. <br /><br />Pamelaflauberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18424439866515694972noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-90071190279299488792013-03-13T05:40:17.051+07:002013-03-13T05:40:17.051+07:00I enjoyed the rhyming scheme you chose to open eac...I enjoyed the rhyming scheme you chose to open each line. Beautiful play on words. Nicely written. The Write Girlhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01333258283404241827noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-56649927669508202752013-03-13T05:00:27.887+07:002013-03-13T05:00:27.887+07:00Life is not easy for most of us, a good capture.Life is not easy for most of us, a good capture.ayalahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13243362803799877014noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-7116193524206825652013-03-13T04:57:12.508+07:002013-03-13T04:57:12.508+07:00Interesting structure, the way you took a mutation...Interesting structure, the way you took a mutation of the word in the last line to the first word in the next line and still able to give a message. Well written.Kimolisahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16624029898830661332noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-85441248597213869732013-03-13T04:35:26.294+07:002013-03-13T04:35:26.294+07:00Doesn't pay to either turn up very early or ve...Doesn't pay to either turn up very early or very late, in my opinion. Loved the ending.Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-46977064925051230052013-03-13T04:12:50.078+07:002013-03-13T04:12:50.078+07:00Doesn't always pay to turn up early..yes, inde...Doesn't always pay to turn up early..yes, indeed. Interesting nuggets embedded in your poem here.Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-69590473464228592802013-03-13T04:06:57.093+07:002013-03-13T04:06:57.093+07:00perhaps it does not...there are times i wonder wha...perhaps it does not...there are times i wonder what we do it all for that is for sure...you trip us through life pretty quick in this...with a nice internal rhyme as well...nice one line zingers in this as well man...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-6699644196561842372013-03-13T03:49:34.100+07:002013-03-13T03:49:34.100+07:00Life's getting hard. Great feeling to this.Life's getting hard. Great feeling to this.anthonynorthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06680944720744601697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1741504605630732992.post-89234954088447665572013-03-13T03:27:31.123+07:002013-03-13T03:27:31.123+07:00Cons and pros don’t justify opinions...true that.....Cons and pros don’t justify opinions...true that...some food for thoughts in this stanClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.com